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my test movement

Started by: croft70 | Replies: 4 | Views: 430

croft70

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May 12, 2009 12:20 AM #417170
mmm did you remember i make some animation a lot of time ago well i was making it better so well that what i go is an test i upload 2 animation on newgrounds so if you want to see it come to my profile
www.crafto.newgrounds.com

well this is the animation/test

www.truploader.com/view/041266

i didn put the sound already so what do you think?

sorry i dont speak english good


this is other one this one dont have sound because when i put it the flash close and i dont save the file

http://www.truploader.com/view/841153
tickbaby

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May 12, 2009 2:09 AM #417214
I wish I could animate that good lol.
BluGil
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May 12, 2009 2:20 AM #417229
The movements are too fast and he never really moves upward. More up and down motion will make the overall energy and flow seem better. Sounds like ****in feng shui. Just do it.
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May 12, 2009 2:51 AM #417248
in the first move he stands like 0.01 sec before he falls.. thats bad, maybe deleting some frame it will look better

And the kick.. ehm.. idk i dont like it maybe some of anticipation will help there

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May 12, 2009 6:41 PM #417519
I really liked the top one, but its way too fast. Slow it down and it will be great
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