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May 22, 2009 11:08 AM #422366
i was unable to finish my part for theanimplanet weekly 5 before im leaving, thus making me "too slow"
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May 22, 2009 11:12 AM #422367
I didn't think that was too slow at all. The movements were good, but it was kinda wobbly in places. And his hands slid up and down the handle at times. This is good overall, though.
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May 22, 2009 11:14 AM #422369
i meant i was too slow in finishing the animation
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May 23, 2009 4:26 AM #422756
Too much easing. The movements were not fluid together.
You over eased most of the movements. They were smooth though.
Movements showed little-moderate force.

Eh, it was good. The best part is that the movements were smooth. You have to apply the right amount of easing though. Easing is good, but too much ruins the animation.
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May 23, 2009 11:54 AM #422947
Some of the hammer swings did not really require trails. But the ones that did had good trails. The hole through the ground wasn't all that great, make it wider and shorter. The spin cycle at the end was good.