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Second Anim-trying the punch again

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May 23, 2009 5:48 PM #423243
I'm trying to get down the punch. This is my second animation ever. Comments and criticism are appreciated and if you could give me tips on to improve what I did wrong, you would be epic.

filebox.me/view/gyisz58em

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May 23, 2009 5:50 PM #423247
http://www.filebox.me/view/gyisz58em

I'm speechless. This is your second animation and it was perfect. I didn't see anything wrong at all, amazing. Great job. You can join my collab by the way, your not "bad" like you said.
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May 23, 2009 5:51 PM #423249
Wow, I'm really flattered. Thanks alot. I feel really good now :P

Thanks.

I did spend quite a bit of time though, even though it's so short :P
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May 23, 2009 5:56 PM #423261
It came out really good so your work payed off, what tool do you use?
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May 23, 2009 6:00 PM #423270
I used the line tool, and the circle tool for the head.
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May 23, 2009 6:01 PM #423274
I see. But great job keep it up man, you have a VERY high ceiling.
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May 23, 2009 6:05 PM #423283
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I see. But great job keep it up man, you have a VERY high ceiling.

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May 23, 2009 6:10 PM #423291
This is not your first, you used easytoon before, huh?
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May 23, 2009 6:14 PM #423298
Honest, I haven't. This is my second animation ever.
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May 23, 2009 6:18 PM #423308
How much time?
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May 23, 2009 6:19 PM #423310
I'm not sure, maybe an hour?
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May 23, 2009 6:21 PM #423314
Hm, you're a natural then. Good job.
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May 23, 2009 6:29 PM #423326
Thanks alot man.

This is lifting my spirits.
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May 23, 2009 6:43 PM #423357
Why does it really matter if it was his second or not, it was good enough for him to have been animating for months.
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May 23, 2009 7:06 PM #423400
Hm, this is worth a comment..

Nicely done if it's one of your first animations.. Still some flaws tho, nothing big:
The legs are resizing a lot. (could be your style?)
And the other arm is staying in a stiff position, it should flow more backward.

keep animating
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