Im New, Check Out These Anis

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jmadlock108

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May 24, 2009 8:48 PM #424215
here's a few of my anis

heavy spacing
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run
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some camera tricks
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a short part of my series
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May 24, 2009 8:50 PM #424218
Alright, well obviously you've used pivot before.
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May 24, 2009 8:54 PM #424223
You need to work on that run. The front leg doesn't extend far enough so it looks awkward and stiff.
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May 24, 2009 10:21 PM #424268
Quote from Liquid Energy
Alright, well obviously you've used pivot before.


I'm glad you gave him good C&C.

The run looks sissy as hell. It looks like a girl prancing. Extend the legs more to fix it.
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May 25, 2009 1:12 AM #424333
hmmm - good work choppy and you need to work on easing but good work - keep practicing. - you'll get there.
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May 25, 2009 6:56 AM #424425
Actually, choppiness and easing were two things that I thought he did relatively well.
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May 25, 2009 7:23 AM #424436
Good work so far, you should post something a little longer.

Also, have a look at this:

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You seem to be missing the entire "vii" part in your running loop. Try adding them in, a run cycle looks much better with them.
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May 25, 2009 8:21 AM #424502
Quote from Zed
Actually, choppiness and easing were two things that I thought he did relatively well.


Yea, that guy didn't even look at the animations.

Anyway, great work. Loveing the effects.
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May 25, 2009 2:37 PM #424730
Idk maybe its my computer.
But everything is very slow.
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May 25, 2009 3:03 PM #424739
It's your computer.
Run is weird, what scarecrow said. Also the last one is a bit stiff.
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May 25, 2009 3:41 PM #424766
The run is awkward.
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May 26, 2009 12:20 AM #425149
The running is just embarassing compared to the other stuff, dude. Watch a track meet or something and adjust. And for the running, don't move the damn scene.