My first Easytoon

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May 25, 2009 5:23 AM #424379
Dow do ya think?

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May 25, 2009 6:45 AM #424411
Wow, that's actually pretty good for your first. You need to work on alot of things though. Nice work.
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May 25, 2009 8:18 AM #424494
And those things would be:

Wobblyness
A plot
Particles
Easing
Anticipation
Force
Physics
General movements.

Get workin..
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May 25, 2009 3:01 PM #424738
Way to be subtle krome, if you need clarification on anything
krome said you should work on just ask.
Otherwise he basicly got it all...
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May 25, 2009 3:04 PM #424741
You know, general movements and physics aren't that different from each other :S
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May 25, 2009 3:17 PM #424749
Yes they are.
General movements are...well moving running, jumping, punching, etc.
But physics are how his arm will fall after a punch, or how high he will jump.
=D
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May 25, 2009 3:21 PM #424755
I say it is great for the starting relm, i'm defenitley putting this in my novelty collection with all the other animators and thier famous work.personaly i don't exactly bieleve sweeptl knows of we are saying. check prospects thread it is some were way back it will teach basic physics i geuss. i'd also recommend To study up on frozen pheonix he has alot of good flash animations, get some insparation you know
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May 25, 2009 3:48 PM #424771
For your first it was excellent,
but it was way choppy, and it lacked easing. Physics were off, as well.
(And everything the others said.)

Ah, and weird storyline.