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Run loop need help.

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May 28, 2009 12:14 AM #426624
I keep trying this over and over, and i still feel like something is wrong.

http://filebox.me/view/s08z4mrk4
http://filebox.me/view/f8b9iq75f
http://filebox.me/view/pd99tx5be
http://filebox.me/view/hmyq7mt6m

the first two suck, and the last two are OK.
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May 28, 2009 12:31 AM #426632
Your problem is that the limb movements are choppy and stiff, and the run itself doesn't look like it loops. The last 2 aren't ok imo, and I think the best thing you could do is study other running animations, and watch some track videos on Youtube.
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May 28, 2009 12:41 AM #426637
I actually thought the first was the best.
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May 28, 2009 1:14 AM #426652
Make him lean forward. You can make the whole body go up and down as he runs. make it a lot more dynamic, and be sure to include the joints in the legs and arms. right now the arms look stiff. Youve got elbows. and so should your stick
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May 28, 2009 2:03 AM #426665
make him lift the knees more, and i think ur using line tool which is ok, but brush is better
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May 28, 2009 2:14 AM #426670
Quote from Blot
make him lift the knees more, and i think ur using line tool which is ok, but brush is better


That is only your opinion.
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May 28, 2009 2:17 AM #426672
He is using brush. you can tell.
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May 28, 2009 8:25 AM #426792
Normally peoples back bends a bit when running. Also, It needs to be more fluid, and not having the back/head stationary.

Btw, the last one was with line and the rest were brush.
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May 28, 2009 2:11 PM #426891
-His body, head should bounce up and down
-Every frame, when you connect the legs, the body should be in the middle of the line you get (just higher)
-His arms should move different way

http://www.truploader.com/view/557592

I made this a couple of days ago for one guy here, I hope it will help you too, it was just a short "Show-how" animation.

you can download the fla here

http://www.truploader.com/view/285860
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May 29, 2009 12:59 AM #427143
Thanks, Tawnik.
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