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May 31, 2009 1:04 AM #428619
Okay.. here my first walk.
http://www.truploader.com/view/310579
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May 31, 2009 1:21 AM #428627
It is very wobbly and the legs look weird as they move, try using some of the tutorials in the help section.
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May 31, 2009 1:22 AM #428628
http://www.truploader.com/view/067774 Punch Test 1
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May 31, 2009 2:06 AM #428652
umm.......... BOOM?
http://www.truploader.com/view/374217
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May 31, 2009 3:27 AM #428697
The walking guy doesn't move enough, and it's too fast. The colors for the splosion are off, and the punch lacks easing and anticipation, and its force isn't great. Try to add a few frames to the beginning, and have him follow through, it would make it easier to CC.
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May 31, 2009 4:02 AM #428714
lolz got bored its not meant to be good animation... but... i lke it..
http://www.truploader.com/view/996147
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May 31, 2009 1:37 PM #428941
Try using layers, and don't use the eraser tool to animate particles.
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May 31, 2009 1:54 PM #428955
Walk
The walk is wobbly and not very smooth. Make the back leg come slower up and faster back down to the ground each step. His neck looks stiff so try to move his head up and down as he walks.

Punch
The legs shouldn't switch positions during the punch. The whole body should move forward (the stickman steps forward as he punches). Also don't bend his legs so much for such a small move forward, especially a punch.

Explosion
Very choppy, make the explosion slowly evolve and grow, and make small particles around it. Funny choice of colors. Make it longer (more frames) so that it is smoother.

Fishing
When the fish drags the cord, it should bend to the right, not left. When he's dragged into the water have less frames to make it faster.

Hope this helps. ^_^
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May 31, 2009 2:00 PM #428959
STOPANIMATINGFORTHERESTOFYOURLIFEPLEASE!!!!
in other words
STOP ANIMATING NOW FOR THE REST OF YOUR LIFE PLEASE!!!!

Terrible, you can't even spell which would have been your strong point in the animation but it sucked. I mean, you didn't even try to make your animation fluid and have connecting movements. It's shit. Not even noobish. It will never become noobish. please, never join a collab till you can actually make noob animations.
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Jun 1, 2009 9:56 PM #429884
O...kay....thanks for the encouragment.

walk test 2
http://www.truploader.com/view/793425

walk test 3
http://www.truploader.com/view/814725
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Jun 1, 2009 10:29 PM #429908
Keep working on the arm/leg movements, but jeeze dude, you HAVE to move the head, it can not stay stationary, that's why it looks so unrealistic.
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Jun 1, 2009 10:32 PM #429914
okay thanks:Smile:
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Jun 2, 2009 12:03 AM #430010
Punch 2... i had a hard time with the legs... they wobble.... ALOT
http://www.truploader.com/view/234902
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Jun 2, 2009 12:20 AM #430014
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Punch 2... i had a hard time with the legs... they wobble.... ALOT
http://www.truploader.com/view/234902


:U looks like you're doing it on purpose, lel.

Just make sure you draw them out right, and double check if the legs are in the same position as the previous frame, while moving towards the destination. Don't move the legs to one position and snap back the next frame, that causes wobbling.
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Jun 2, 2009 12:27 AM #430017
no... i'm not trying to make it bad... i'm just a REEAALLLY bad noob.
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