You need to work on everything. Got to the forums and post some tests there.

Fail. Seriously, GET A BLAM BUTTON GOD DAMMIT!

This was pretty shocking to be honest. I understand this is probably your first animation, but If you want to practice and show you work, go here.

: http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/forumdisplay.php?f=108

Now, the problems I can see is that.:

The proportions of the body was wrong
Easing, (there was none)
Choppyness (there wasn't a non shoppy moment)
Stiffness (did his back bend?)
Anticipation (did the moves look realistic?)
Force (I didn't see any)
Smoothness (lol)

And don't post you email adress in a movie please.

If you do carry on with this, I'm sure a lot of people would be more inclined to help you in the link I gave earlier.

Peace.

I can't see shit, where's the animation?

>:C You ruined the ending for me! The damn plot was in the description.

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I can't see shit, where's the animation?

*sigh*


http://www.stickpageportal.com/watchmovie/harry-potter-vs-jedi.html

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Harry takes on a Jedi! Pretty Brave! But will he win?
Note: Harry Potter fans may not like the ending.

the tea sirloin is jrock

Great Post ! Thank you for sharing information. I am big fan of Harry Potter Series. It is one of my favourite one.

jedi would win. of course. i mean, i've gotta give harry the magic prowess. but the jedi have lightsabers, and they have invisible force shields ( i know these things ) so the jedi would probably win.

Jedi will win. Its because Jedi's have the force and lightsabers but harry potter only haves his stick. :)

starkiller your right they do have light sabers but harry potter has a death spell

thanks of aport