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(take them out, take them out, take them out, take them out...)

lately i dont know exactly what im doin
i wanna make a difference but i gotta make improvements
i gotta get the clearence but i cant withstand the movement
gotta rise up to the challenge but inside im so clueless
ive fought the good fight, but we're never gonna make it
your just a stupid bitch to me so why would i fake it
i thought i loved you once but i havent felt the anguish
we were two different people like we spoke a different language
ive fought my inner demons im tellin you they're vanquished
so im movin on ahead like a train without a purpose
goin in blind best believe me man im nervous
keepin up with life just tryin to encourage
i need a breath of air let me rise up to the surface
certain serpent servants always tend to preach the sermons
about the afterlife makin me wish i was worth it
(makin me wish i was worth it, makin me wish i was worth it)

(x2)obviously im not gonna be
any thing else to you or me
tell me right now what i got to believe
if anythings certain ill be free
providin me, so violently
tryin to sneak up so silently
creepin on you so quietly
and i cant breath i cant breath

lately ive been thinkin man is it all worth it
to fight for the freedom while were standin in a circus
where were stuck in an ideal of what is really workin
never questionin the masses and actin like its perfect
workin shitty jobs just so we can make the purchase
all a hope to make it big or die in the service
just another workin person watchin his life worsen
from being treated like a slave to his wife out flirtin
goin on daily makes him another crazy suburban
i couldnt see myself ever being that hurtin
id rather fly with the clouds than dig in the dirt and
noone will ever **** with me, my life will come first and
its not a selfish thing, its just that i will never burn then
theres too many people who have the chance for earnin
it fades to grey, and goes away but they still arent learnin
(but they still arent learnin, but they still arent learnin)

(x2)obviously im not gonna be
any thing else to you or me
tell me right now what i got to believe
if anythings certain ill be free
providin me, so violently
tryin to sneak up so silently
creepin on you so quietly
and i cant breath i cant breath

a little thing i learned in my 17 years
after so much drama and so many beers
after dealin with love and hate from my peers
after dealin with every last one of my fears
after being told i love you by two people in a year
after knowing what they mean when thats what i hear
after nearly giving up because i dont know where to steer
after gaining back control when i thought i would veer
i learned to recognize who's fake and who's real
who will stick beside you through the toughest of deals
and who will turn away from you when hard times appear
learned to turn the other cheek when i know how they feel
but thats all in the past i mean ive got all i need
if you know me as friend know ill always try to be
and as far as im concerned i dont have enemies
i dont need respect from everyone to be happy
you can have your own opinion doesnt mean shit to me
its not like i look at you, so why would i freak
its not worth my time to hate someone i dont see
i'm done with the bullshit, im finally free
(peace)

(x4)obviously im not gonna be
any thing else to you or me
tell me right now what i got to believe
if anythings certain ill be free
providin me, so violently
tryin to sneak up so silently
creepin on you so quietly
and i cant breath i cant breath

wh


where did you come from

From yo' momma Scarecrow!

I'd like some critisizm, I mean jesus.

The beat is sick.
And so are the lyrics.
I think the vocals are turned up a little too high though.
Other than that, nice job.

Well it was a good song.
I downloaded it.

you desperately need a person to master your songs

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you desperately need a person to master your songs

Haha, I just record directly over the beat in Audacity, so yeah, pretty much.

listened up until the first chorus, your flow is bland as hell and i don't think i could characterize any of your rhymes as clever. you don't communicate any feeling or enthusiasm, i think the best description of this song would be "boring."