Iso Critique: first animation atempt

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NeCrOdE

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Mar 29, 2008 3:11 AM #104627

some parts look choppy and akward but i need specific points for improvement, stuff to help me move along faster while practicing.

thx in advance.

(btw this is only scene1, not done yet)

EDIT:
second anim: http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beamzzzda5.gif
Third anim: http://img79.imageshack.us/my.php?image=combothinggifnz0.gif

reposted first anim (saved properly now)

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Mar 29, 2008 3:16 AM #104634

Cool for a first try. I don't want to really suggest anything manly because I don't see ALOT wrong. There is some stuff but it is good in either way.

1. Make them crouch before the jump. I saw in some instanses you didn't crouch them.

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Mar 29, 2008 6:51 AM #104798

it is really slow and choppy and the sticks are horrible also practice basic movements for instance know one jumps the way that clown did

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Mar 29, 2008 7:57 AM #104832

slow uneased and stiff .

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Mar 30, 2008 4:22 AM #105589

You made all the sticks? the big 'un is really comical. not in a funny way, however.

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Mar 30, 2008 6:15 PM #105966

well, er, um, maybe speed it up plz.

btw jet no i diddnt copy u i just took the test and ended up like this

NeCrOdE

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Mar 30, 2008 11:17 PM #106244

thanks for the input guys. i didn't notice most of that stuff until you mentioned it and ill remember to work on it.

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Apr 19, 2008 4:52 AM #117997

http://img99.imageshack.us/my.php?image=beamzzzda5.gif
not much body mmovement in this one but tell me what you think. (i think i got better :Happy: )

btw except for the guy at ebggining stks are from droidz

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Apr 19, 2008 5:02 AM #118003

don't double post, it's called the edit button.
@ anim, like the concept but the movements were off, good job if u did make those stks. read some tuts, and just practice. Also you should look at good animators anims, like doomdooer or powerfuse or frodomoj. good luck!
@ second, holy improvement. way better than the first, still read tuts and look at the good pplz anims, the running and movements could still use some work. GOOD JOB ON BEAMS (i've never seen a newb pull off a beam that good...)

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Apr 19, 2008 5:06 AM #118006

Quote from SRC
don't double post, it's called the edit button.
@ anim, like the concept but the movements were off, good job if u did make those stks. read some tuts, and just practice. Also you should look at good animators anims, like doomdooer or powerfuse or frodomoj. good luck!
@ second, holy improvement. way better than the first, still read tuts and look at the good pplz anims, the running and movements could still use some work. GOOD JOB ON BEAMS (i've never seen a newb pull off a beam that good...)

srry. post was a few pages back so i decided to bump it rather than make a new topic.

and ty for the input =)

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Apr 19, 2008 8:52 AM #118065

Like your avvy. ITS TEH EDDY! i lieked the second anim

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Jun 20, 2008 4:22 PM #160860

actually made this several weeks ago but net was down...anyways another animation, i think im getting better but somehow my movements still dont look realistic.....

Stks from droidz: blast (second beam), electric beam (first beam), smoke, fades, hells' hammer.