Pepsi-First FL-Dark Cave

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Jun 20, 2009 3:14 PM #444231
I consider this my first FL cause the other ones were just learning the program.

It's really short, really bad, and other stuff. Please help me get better, I suck at this program.

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I didn't know what to name it

7 downloads already, booya kasha
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Jun 20, 2009 3:35 PM #444239
The drums are hurting my ears really bad. Just take them out, dammit.

Also the weird horn/didgeridoo thing is ****ing Communist.
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Jun 20, 2009 4:30 PM #444266
Well, I like the drums but maybe make them a little quieter.

And some noted were a little off but I feel that that went well with the whole mood of the song.

Pretty good :)
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Jun 20, 2009 4:46 PM #444278
Thanks :D
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Jun 20, 2009 5:51 PM #444344
Seems like everyone is trying to make music now :\

It's not to bad, practice making some melodies.

And making more advanced drums.

It wasn't to bad, I still have my first FL<3

We all start somewhere :3
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Jun 20, 2009 6:07 PM #444355
Thanks Uni.

Hey, are you DD?
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Jun 20, 2009 6:15 PM #444359
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Thanks Uni.

Hey, are you DD?



Yea I am.

Who are you?
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Jun 20, 2009 6:17 PM #444360
The Neighborhood newbie.
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Jun 20, 2009 6:20 PM #444362
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The Neighborhood newbie.


Yet, you know a 2yr old alias.

Whatever, keep trying with music.
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Jun 20, 2009 7:35 PM #444422
DD? What does DD stand for? The only thing I can think of is DoomDooer.
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Jun 20, 2009 8:16 PM #444443
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DD? What does DD stand for? The only thing I can think of is DoomDooer.


DickDooer .
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Jun 20, 2009 8:20 PM #444449
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DD? What does DD stand for? The only thing I can think of is DoomDooer.

Darkness² .
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Jun 20, 2009 8:21 PM #444451
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Jun 20, 2009 10:25 PM #444503
Okay, this one is hard to explain. It's called "Party Life", think of each new layer as a party guest-one might be mellow and chill, while another might be exciting and awesome, while another one might be causing drama. And notice at the end slowly all party members leave...

Symbolism FTW.


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It gets a bit chaotic-kinda makes your ears bleed with all those high pitched notes a little in
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Jun 20, 2009 10:46 PM #444511
I recommend adding some chords and getting the right volume on the drums.

That was great though, I wish I could make something "symbolic".