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OK, so many anims. o.o Here we go.
Major:
3/16/09 - Insanimation: http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/Insanimation-117764316
This is probably my first big and serious flash project. I'm n00b. But I worked very hard on this one. I began doing this as a test but I decided to add a storyline and music. So this is the result.
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6/01/09 - Dont Give Up: http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/Dont-Give-Up-124436181
This is my second submission here. It's a compilation of my tests. Well, about 2 years ago I've seen animations like XiaoXiao, Killing Spree, etc. and I wanted to animate. But my parents said I can't, becouse I have bad hands (cerebral palsy). So anyway I've started to animate...
Please enjoy.

Tests:
1/12/09 - http://portfolio.sticktacular.com/portalview.php?creation=433
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=461517
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=958887
1/13/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=475367
1/14/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=476477
1/14/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=246183
1/15/09 - http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=21800
1/18/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/970988
3/22/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/474641
5/14/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/169435
5/14/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/566348
6/07/09 - http://jartemius.deviantart.com/art/RHG-Demo-125127285
6/10/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/365199
6/12/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/916075
6/13/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/314549
6/13/09 - http://www.truploader.com/view/282544

Pretty much, eh?

For the first one: Nice smooth moves, but physics were off. I see you were trying to do Jcamelos style. And you got the song from "I forgot the name of it" Terkoiz's animation right? I'll edit this post when I watch more of your anims.

For the second one: Very nice(I mean like verrry nice). Great improvement. Just work on the physics again.

Cerebral palsy, huh? Pretty impressive. The tests are really short but there's a lot of them, so I guess it's ok.

The first "big submission" was, eh... The movements were OK, even though they lacked force and were slow. The main thing you can work on is direction, you left a lot of still frames, probably to sync it with the music, amirite? But when that empty screen came up, and the music was still playing, I thought the animation was over. That happened like 10 times until I got tired of the whole animation. You could very easily fix it and improve.

What I wouldn't recommend is using cerebral palsy as an excuse - that won't get you anywhere. No offense, but that's how the internet works.

Those are really nice. The movements actually look real. The trampoline one was probably my favorite. On the bow and arrow one, I would give it more anticipation, or drawback of the arrow. It seemed.. too short.

Wow, quite excellent I can tell you're no such beginner as i thought you were going to be. *Bows*

I really like your stick style. Very good.
The animations are perrty stiff.

The style is unoriginal, you can't just copy a style.

Yes you can, who says?

By the way, N T, you disabled PMing on StickAnims.

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By the way, N T, you disabled PMing on StickAnims.

Oh yeah, So only mods or admins can pm me. I'll change it.

OK, Thanks everybody for the coments. (:

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Yes you can, who says?

You know what I mean.

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You know what I mean.

Do you mean Jc's style, huh?

i just got my ass kicked by a kid with cerebral palsy O_O
shit, i suck