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Jul 6, 2009 7:37 AM #454289
Clothes was an example.
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Jul 6, 2009 12:56 PM #454342
I think it's a bit unrealistic. The run should be just kicking legs forward and back, you have to make it look more like your peddling, it should move in a cycle. Some parts look to stiff too, if your gonna double frame, add more frames in between first so it looks more eased.
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Jul 6, 2009 3:05 PM #454374
There is no single double frame in this animation.
I do not quite understand what you mean, because in my eyes he IS kicking forward and backward, and every single part of his body moves so I don't know..

Ok it's unrealistic, but is it bad?
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Jul 6, 2009 3:38 PM #454387
Oh my god, Lixu, why do you post a test ? Why dont you make a whole series of anime ? I dont really see the point of this topic guys, he posted an animation, he wants comments on this animation, he needs to know what he should fix on it.

Stick is the skeleton of fullbody, once you have fat stick its fullbody, + the arms were detailed enough, same for legs, there's no need for clothes or facial, omg, why facial ?? Will you use that in the animation ? no you wont, dont mess your scene with useless things !! :)
Choppy ? How come ?? Explain please
Drifts, I think that the movement was alright, all the parts keep moving all the time, idk if you see any stiff part, but I dont.And I dont see anything that was un-realistic about this animation.
Yeah, that's my honest opinion, I told you that there's no need for criticism, but when I was watching the animation again and again I saw a little thing that was not correct, its the back, it resizes a lil bit.Fix that and you have decent run cycle.
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Jul 6, 2009 3:59 PM #454399
If it's decent, it's not perfect, so there are things to critique....

Also, thanks for backing me up but I think Drifts is allowed to have his own sight to my animation, and I like that. Not everyone likes the same thing : )
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Jul 6, 2009 4:03 PM #454404
Yeah, I just pointed out my statements..

If you want perfect you should act their words of advice, but as you said, its just a test, you were not looking for perfect, because if you were you should add
-bg
-sounds
-shading
-colors
-details
-clothing

but for a test, for a running test, you can do it just with this, if you were focusing on the movement, which I think you were.If you were focusing on the expressions in his face, you should have added the facial.
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Jul 6, 2009 4:06 PM #454405
The Arms Look Greatly Formed And The Running Is Clean And Smooth,It Doesn't Seem like Someone Hitting Him In The Back Of His Knees Or Anything,Nice Job,But Exactly What They Said..The Head..
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Jul 6, 2009 4:13 PM #454406
I guess it's alright, could have used more easing in and out of the foot steps though.

I wouldn't call it full body. It mainly looks like the outline to a stick figure and you tried adding muscles to the arms but you didn't add any detail anywhere else. Could be better.
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Jul 6, 2009 4:21 PM #454409
I understand your point Tawnik, good one.

...Isn't this the first time you actually think my animations are decent? My god, this is my lucky day, Arch-Angel.
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Jul 6, 2009 6:20 PM #454466
lixu may i show an example so you understand what i mean?
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Jul 6, 2009 6:42 PM #454476
Yes, you sure may.
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Jul 6, 2009 6:45 PM #454481
Alrighty,

This is an example of what you done.
http://www.truploader.com/view/941383

This is what i felt you should have done.
http://www.truploader.com/view/254816
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Jul 6, 2009 6:52 PM #454486
Oh wow, that's the best tip I've gotten in ages, thanks allot Drifts, you're totally right <3
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Jul 6, 2009 7:02 PM #454496
Quote from Drifts
I think it's a bit unrealistic. The run should be just kicking legs forward and back, you have to make it look more like your peddling, it should move in a cycle. Some parts look to stiff too, if your gonna double frame, add more frames in between first so it looks more eased.


Drifts, this confused me :), but great point !!! I've never noticed that =)
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Jul 6, 2009 7:58 PM #454526
lol i guess we all make mistakes lol. typo, it was meant to say shouldn't.
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