So much suck [MaxZ]

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Jul 12, 2009 12:40 PM #457923
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Oh god, my eyes. Don't mind him disappearing into the ground for a moment on the first kick, it's a failed tremor.

EDIT: I'll add another arm later. I have to go now and I wanted to post this.
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Jul 13, 2009 12:20 AM #458194
It was hard to follow but once you add the other arm and a head I'm sure it'll look better. Nice particles.
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Jul 13, 2009 8:11 PM #458637
Bump .
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Jul 13, 2009 8:47 PM #458668
MaxZ you animate sloppy, not as in bad, as in it slides together smoothely,as if the figure is rubber.
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Jul 13, 2009 8:48 PM #458670
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And your point is?
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Jul 14, 2009 6:39 AM #459118
Particles=Awesome
thats all i have to say
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Jul 14, 2009 10:49 AM #459164
Thanks :]
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Jul 15, 2009 3:49 PM #460202
Bump for real criticism.
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Jul 15, 2009 7:52 PM #460351
my c&c is simple:
1. if you say "it suck" i will not try to tell you that it looks good, even if it does.
2. its not usual and you will get a unnatural movement if you animate like: left arm, right arm, head, etc. draw the body in total. later you can add stuff like shoes or hat, but the body have do be drawn at once.
the movements are good. the jump to the right corner is to fast and he jump out of a strange pose.
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Jul 15, 2009 8:00 PM #460354
Honk is right about drawing the entire body, I tried making an long animation with out giving my sticks heads and when I finally added them it looked terrible.
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Jul 15, 2009 8:03 PM #460357
'unnatural movement'
'the movements are good'

Wait, what?
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Jul 16, 2009 6:15 AM #460553
You can't just draw 3 lines and animate them, it's all about starting with a head and all that shit.
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Jul 16, 2009 11:16 AM #460593
I used to start with the head, but now I seem to add it last.
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Jul 16, 2009 11:19 AM #460597
Quote from FoShizzle
You can't just draw 3 lines and animate them, it's all about starting with a head and all that shit.


I started with legs, therefore he's kicking all the time.