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Jul 14, 2009 5:15 PM #459342
Heres some of my eztoons! Some old, some not so old. Either way ENjOY :D
Oh and any critiques and comments (hell even critisims!) are most welcome as i know i have alot of room for improvement!

Older:

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Image (Owned...)

Newerish:

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Image (Me likes Booms ;p)

Image (New greyfox project)

Current Project:

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Jul 14, 2009 5:22 PM #459347
Nice! But the booms are weird, for it seemed like liquid* dropped out of it.

*no, not Liquid, as in the user.
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Jul 14, 2009 6:24 PM #459405
i like them all. and wtf you can lol on this? man the transforation is good! and i also hope you go on with your project :D
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Jul 14, 2009 6:29 PM #459411
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i like them all. and wtf you can lol on this? man the transforation is good! and i also hope you go on with your project :D


Ill be finishing that project sometime in august when i get my tablet! yay no more mouse!
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Jul 14, 2009 6:41 PM #459434
y-you-YOU USE MOUSE FOR THAT!?
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Jul 14, 2009 6:54 PM #459452
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y-you-YOU USE MOUSE FOR THAT!?


u bet ya ;) rusty old RSI machine is a better term lol
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Jul 14, 2009 7:02 PM #459465
You're good.... No seriously, You're good for doing all of that with a mouse.
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Jul 14, 2009 8:15 PM #459536
I agree with rival, I fail epicly at doing anything fb with the mouse.

Now onto C&C, the fb was all good, angles and movements were nice, booms kinda need to fade a tad faster and some of the particles need easing. The sticks were the main weak point, they were wobbly and their movements lacked power, Also, the flashing effects on the first one need lots of work, or at least the first few.
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Jul 15, 2009 12:49 AM #459728
i dont usually use flashes an stuffz like that because personally i'd rather enjoy an anim than get a seizure from it.
but fb are amazing with some storyline to em so its not too random like some others ive seen.
btw have u done any fb's w/o the robots? xD
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Jul 15, 2009 4:26 AM #459895
Quote from explosivecontent
i dont usually use flashes an stuffz like that because personally i'd rather enjoy an anim than get a seizure from it.
but fb are amazing with some storyline to em so its not too random like some others ive seen.
btw have u done any fb's w/o the robots? xD


I could but robots are cool lol. Nah seriously until i get my tablet i could do a regular person but it probably wont look that good. And grey fox isnt completely robot, hes a cyborg ;)

And yeah stick ar'nt my strong point. I used to do them alot but started doing full body. Good practice with my mouse. Its wierd though cause after drawing with my mouse in say eztoons, drawing on paper with a penicl feels sooo much easier.
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Jul 15, 2009 5:01 AM #459906
VERY true indeed.
i still cannot FB though. maybe with a tablet but im not going to get one
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Jul 15, 2009 5:17 AM #459920
I love the explosions. The style is amazing. The only thing I didn't like was the arm fall in the greyfox project. It just looked odd.
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Jul 15, 2009 12:25 PM #460124
I noticed ppl didnt particularily like the flashes and i understand fully. So do u think these look better (I removed the flashes from them).

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And ppl were commenting on my explosion so i tried to fix it:

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Plz keep the great suggestions, comments, pointers and help coming!!
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Jul 15, 2009 12:32 PM #460127
Yeh, I like them like this better, but the smoke explosion is weird. Seems like they leek :P
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Jul 15, 2009 2:43 PM #460170
I love the bullet animation!!
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