TSS - EP1 (First 6 Pages)

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Fr0zEnPh0eNiX

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Jul 17, 2009 12:48 AM #461308
Hey guys, I really wanted to save all this until I finished the first chapter up, but I need to make sure I have any kind of audience besides myself and two other people before I have a real motivator to continue (pathetic I know).

This story has been in planning for over eight years... and I have a pretty good grasp on it now I feel. Almost all of the artwork and all animations Ive ever done to some extent was connected to this story.

Also if you don't like manga, don't bother.

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Jul 17, 2009 1:04 AM #461326
That looks pretty professional to me. I'd read it for ya! =)
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Jul 17, 2009 1:15 AM #461333
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That looks pretty professional to me. I'd read it for ya! =)


Wuu! Thank you!
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Jul 17, 2009 4:47 AM #461525
nice nice

i think u can make it as a great manga writer.

I love the faces ^^

Keep going like this its pretty good
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Jul 17, 2009 5:35 AM #461550
wow really nice, only fault i see is that i think "effect" should be "affect" not sure though
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Jul 17, 2009 5:44 AM #461558
that's really nice! :d
you really should continue it..
btw he reminds me of orochimaru
( naruto character )
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Jul 17, 2009 8:59 AM #461617
Awesome. The style is really simplistic but incredibly effective, I like that.
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Jul 17, 2009 9:09 AM #461620
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wow really nice, only fault i see is that i think "effect" should be "affect" not sure though


Actually now that you mention it... I think you're right!

Thanks for pointing that out! Of course if there are any grammatical errors, feel free to let me know. I actually appreciate it... since I'm very good at doing things like that.

I'll fix it as soon as I have the chance.

edit: Wow, and also thanks for the positive support guys, it's really appreciated.

edit 2: Yeah now that you mention it he does look a lot like Orochimaru, only less crazy and snake-like =)
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Jul 17, 2009 9:13 AM #461622
What does TSS stand for, btw?
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Jul 17, 2009 9:35 AM #461628
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What does TSS stand for, btw?


The Seventh Sage
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Jul 17, 2009 10:06 AM #461641
I'd read it. Seems great, and I sort of know you. Over the internet. ._.
Just make sure it's different from the masses.
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Jul 18, 2009 2:41 AM #462165
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I'd read it. Seems great, and I sort of know you. Over the internet. ._.
Just make sure it's different from the masses.


No worries, I have a lot of pretty unique ideas I think will make it differ from a lot of other things.
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Jul 18, 2009 11:02 AM #462298
Images aren't loading for me?

"The connection was refused when attempting to contact www.thirdfaction.net."
Vile.
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Jul 18, 2009 11:48 AM #462303
The images are not there for me either.
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Jul 18, 2009 12:00 PM #462305
Pfft, I've seen all of those before. <.<

But yeah, they're not loading for me either.