Hey guys, I really wanted to save all this until I finished the first chapter up, but I need to make sure I have any kind of audience besides myself and two other people before I have a real motivator to continue (pathetic I know).

This story has been in planning for over eight years... and I have a pretty good grasp on it now I feel. Almost all of the artwork and all animations Ive ever done to some extent was connected to this story.

Also if you don't like manga, don't bother.

Enjoy:

That looks pretty professional to me. I'd read it for ya! =)

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That looks pretty professional to me. I'd read it for ya! =)

Wuu! Thank you!

nice nice

i think u can make it as a great manga writer.

I love the faces ^^

Keep going like this its pretty good

wow really nice, only fault i see is that i think "effect" should be "affect" not sure though

that's really nice! :d
you really should continue it..
btw he reminds me of orochimaru
( naruto character )

Awesome. The style is really simplistic but incredibly effective, I like that.

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wow really nice, only fault i see is that i think "effect" should be "affect" not sure though

Actually now that you mention it... I think you're right!

Thanks for pointing that out! Of course if there are any grammatical errors, feel free to let me know. I actually appreciate it... since I'm very good at doing things like that.

I'll fix it as soon as I have the chance.

edit: Wow, and also thanks for the positive support guys, it's really appreciated.

edit 2: Yeah now that you mention it he does look a lot like Orochimaru, only less crazy and snake-like =)

What does TSS stand for, btw?

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What does TSS stand for, btw?

The Seventh Sage

I'd read it. Seems great, and I sort of know you. Over the internet. ._.
Just make sure it's different from the masses.

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I'd read it. Seems great, and I sort of know you. Over the internet. ._.
Just make sure it's different from the masses.

No worries, I have a lot of pretty unique ideas I think will make it differ from a lot of other things.

Images aren't loading for me?

"The connection was refused when attempting to contact www.thirdfaction.net."

The images are not there for me either.

Pfft, I've seen all of those before. <.<

But yeah, they're not loading for me either.