Run/ shoot TEST

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proslayar

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Aug 4, 2009 12:43 AM #470716
well, title says it all.


probably my 4th animation ever, 1st in 6 months, CC appreciated as always.


http://www.truploader.com/view/412671
Sonoya

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Aug 4, 2009 1:09 AM #470725
lol. u made it run as if its in a game and where did the gun come from?
well... work on easing buddy.
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Aug 6, 2009 12:04 AM #471627
Nice smooth, but try to accentuate poses more, like you know, tell which action is more important. Here is saw that everything just slipped from one action to another, do you get it?
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Aug 6, 2009 12:32 AM #471647
I think its time for a head.
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Aug 6, 2009 1:19 AM #471674
it was way too fast, lacked alot of anticipation. and why is there even a V-cam in there. makes the whole thing confusing.

a pointer, just check out real life movements or videos and try to remake them in flash. compare, edit , compare, edit etc. till you get the feeling it looks right, i mean come on, you didnt really think your animation looks good right?