I'm back :D

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Aug 25, 2009 10:55 PM #478787
I'm back, but don't count on me staying :D
just thought i'd post one of my animations lol.
http://img98.imageshack.us/i/esaishpkdodemopiv.gif/
and i dont want to hear choppy, or uneased, or fag.
i want real critism.
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Aug 25, 2009 11:06 PM #478790
it's choppy, uneased, and you're a fag.
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Aug 25, 2009 11:14 PM #478798
Disregard what cryptik said.
Its not bad, but the easing isnt very noticable. Instead of moving the limbs (arms mostly) at the same distance in every frame, make less movement per frame at the start of a movement, and more movement each frame during a movement.
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Aug 26, 2009 10:34 AM #478954
yeah, that's basically it. also, you should try deleting a few frames to add slightly more force.
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Aug 26, 2009 11:59 AM #478975
Quote from cryptik
it's choppy, uneased, and you're a fag.

despite us being good buds he's right man(except for the fag part) you used to be better at this but rust has grown on you or maybe not I dunno.
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Aug 26, 2009 12:24 PM #478988
who ru ?
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Aug 26, 2009 4:44 PM #479094
The animation shouldn't be so big. It should be smaller. Though it's choppy only a bit. (small animations - no choppyness)
I think his back leg should bend.
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Aug 27, 2009 3:49 PM #479547
You animate almost like I do :S Except mine are.. Slow :\
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Aug 27, 2009 4:28 PM #479567
Quote from poppetje3D
who ru ?

The question is, who are YOU?
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Aug 27, 2009 5:09 PM #479579
Or I do it in a simple way and say ru.
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Sep 1, 2009 10:27 PM #482160
i like you people. i just might stay :D