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Sep 4, 2009 9:00 AM #483637
Well I juts imagine that you guys (proffesional guys) have a better skill then me, right ? well so I can get inspirated I wonder If you guys can make an animation movie by this story :

November 1212 ( as the year code for future world )

An agent named johny was walking outside his cabin,walking to his workplace witch was a military forces. john walk finding his friends ignore him like all busy military forces,he then enter his office,checking his gun and staring at it.teet!
teet ! the phone rings , johny pick it up :

Johny : yes commander ?
C.spyvot : emergency mission agent STARSPARKS ! tos of terrorist was attacking san fransico police station

Johny : lol I'm not agent STARSPARKS and we not in san fransisco
C.spyvot : really ? must be too much beer last night .. well , aha ! here is one ! aliens has attacking military base ... thats our base right ?

*transmission cut*

what happen commander ! no response ... must be some sort of attack ! his office's door blast and one spooky creature walks in (mention the creature as you like) and johny quickly shot his head. die bad creature with stinky flesh ! more creatures (this time like small insects) fly out from the ventilation,johny run away from his room,he grab a flame extinguisher and spray it at the insects. one musclefull creature grab him from behind,john pull his knive out and stab the creature's eye,john then slide down a garbage pipe and leaving a granade near the creature.boom ! johny fell to the seawer,in there there was tons of spiders aliens,johny shot it one by one,then he run. one his friend was there but he was infected and too late,
he has turned into one of them ! johny shot his body but only slime coming out. he then relaise there is an oil tank nearby,he run there but the creature strike him. he then throw his lighter to the tank and its explode.

*black screen*

at the end johny walk out from the base that are burning (in the background)

Plizzzzz make one animation like this story !!! I really need inspiration !!!

Johny gun : magnum
The creature he lastly fight : giant with fourarms,green and slimy
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Sep 4, 2009 9:07 AM #483639
Why don't you http://www.stickpage.com/stickfights.shtml watch those and animate this yourself? It sounds like a decent idea that could turn out ok, so you should try and do it. ^_^ If you don't want to... organize your collab better http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=81703 and give each participant a part of the story to animate.
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Sep 4, 2009 9:13 AM #483643
Thanks but ... can you make it for me ? plizzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz !!!
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Sep 4, 2009 2:17 PM #483693
No. Also the year 1212 already passed 800 years ago, its not the "future code". Hurr
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Sep 4, 2009 3:03 PM #483697
Lol. I'd animate something for you, but I can't read a THING you wrote.
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Sep 4, 2009 3:23 PM #483702
Sure, I'll make it for you... >_>
There's a template there, the only things you need to type in are chosen by you! Therefore, copy-paste that template I linked you to and add the specific information in the gaps.

http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=81703
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Sep 5, 2009 1:26 AM #483819
1212 is just a code man, it means 12 : months (this month plus 12 months)
and the other 12 is : years (this year plus 12 years)

Understand ?
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Sep 5, 2009 1:48 AM #483834
Did you have to take my idea? :l
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Sep 5, 2009 1:49 AM #483835
die bad creature with stinky flesh !



EL. OH. EL. :Bricked:
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Sep 5, 2009 2:10 AM #483840
Whats the matter with it jester ?
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Sep 5, 2009 2:10 AM #483841
What idea devour ?
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Sep 5, 2009 2:24 AM #483845
http://www.stickpageportal.com/forums/showthread.php?t=107148
I already did this.
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Sep 5, 2009 2:41 AM #483855
what happen commander !
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Sep 5, 2009 4:49 AM #483888
The only thing wrong with what I posted earlier was that it looked as though it was written by a 6 year old. "Die bad creature with stinky flesh"?

I think it's a good idea, basically (although DONE by Devour first (woot go Devour)) But, you should learn some basic writing, and story telling techniques, such as a larger vocabulary, proper grammar, and my favorite, correct spelling.

Try something along the lines of: "Die," screamed John, "Go back to the rotten pit of a galaxy you oozed out of!" John fired two rounds, and struck the Oozing creature in the forehead...

Y'know? Make it interesting, paint a picture with your words so that animators can properly portray it.
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Sep 5, 2009 5:47 AM #483897
The idea is stolen. Brainstick, next time be original... That's all I have to say. >_>
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