I'm dropping by to ask you stick figure pros to take a look at my work and tell me what you think.



Sticknia.com

This first series is to hone my techniques. The second series will be a Zombie Apocalypse Tale.

The site is still being built, but the art is all there.

Thanks for any input!

it's kind of difficult to understand what is happening. perhaps colour the blood?

stickman@sticknia.com
cool email.
art is nice i guess, it's just stick figures, nothing interesting. comic looks way to boring for me to have any desire to actually read it so i don't know whats going on in it but i'm sure its quite dull.

I've been trying to make them more clear as the series has progressed.
Have you looked through all 19?

I must hand it to you, this is the first actually decent looking stick comic I've seen. Though I haven't seen many stick comics. You did top explosm graphically but that's not a feat or anything. I think the image you posted looks good. If I knew what was going on in the context I think I'd get it for the most part, but now I see a skeleton jumping out of the body to attack. To me that seems clear.

The only recommendation I can provide is to make the panels in the comic series a bit more clear. If you're serious about comics then a good book for you to look into is "Comics and Sequential Art" by Will Eisner. GFet it from a library, look it over, and see what he says.

Also the end of the first comic seems a bit unclear. I can't tell if he's killing the guard who had just opened the door or if the guard just slammed the door. The 6th panel, 2 sticks and a head, is what confused me the most.

It isn't bad though. Not particularly what would be my taste but you drew it well enough to be noticeably more graphic than the expected stick figure series.

Thanks man.

New comic will be up late tonight or by noon tomorrow!

Keep reading!

Comic #22 is up!

Did that ninja can spawn skeletons !?

Maybe.
:heh:
Keep reading and find out!

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Please comment when you read, I'll try to incorporate your suggestions.
Comic #23 is up!

Also! Promo character shot!

New comic is up!
Link in my sig.
Something a little different this time.

where you find stickpage?before that,idid not find it.when my friend tell me i also like it.

You can find the link in my first post above, or you can click the banner in my signature line below.
I'd post the link again, but the board wont let me.

New comic up!
Link in my signature.
Also, new character!