hmm, yes good sir it sure it is good poetry, maybe you should make a signature with stick figures blood and black lines that are poorly drawn limbs with that text in arial bold written across the top also put uzis and deagles in, they'r rate cool.

no, seriously, what do you guys think?

copyright that before I steal it.

Sounds stupid.

I highly doubt you have a gun let alone a gun full of bullets so I can conclude you're only saying this to sound like a 10 year old badass. And having a dream isn't that special, it's what the dream is that counts. I have a dream, I have lots of dreams and so does everyone else so it's nothing special.

I kind of like the line if it's not in the context of describing yourself. I might steal it.

I've heard it before somwhere. Maybe it was something similar, but it involved dreams and loaded weapons.

I love the way you react to thinking up a line like that. Go start writing emo songs or something, they're all shit with somehwat acceptable one-liners.
On a more serious note, it could be 'poetic gold' if it was used in a poem. Because right now it's just a line that you may have subconsciously picked up from somewhere. Until it's put to use it's rubbish.

sure is pretentious as fuck in this thread.

i had a dream

and a gun full o bullets to shoot yo motha ****as with kablam

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I was filling out a facebook quiz and one of the questions was "What do you have?" and i put: A dream and a gun full of bullets. I think i have struck poetic gold right there. Any thoughts?

i used to hate you for your avatar, but now i hate you for this.

plus, it doesn't even sound original.

also, fuck you.

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sure is pretentious as fuck in this thread.

and we all live in dirt walled hovels.

i think it's good. not exactly poetry, but a line that could be used in a poem. still it's pretty good

Sounds like something a gangster would say in a really cliche movie.

Yeah, I gotta write and record a last rap for mine and keg's third album, to be blunt, I'm stealing it.

So generic and unoriginal.