punchs test

Started by: imfe | Replies: 2 | Views: 281

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Sep 27, 2009 10:06 AM #492618
ww w.truploader.com/view/669780[

Delete the space in the WWW.

my first flash in like 2-3 years..

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Sep 27, 2009 4:19 PM #492673
http://www.truploader.com/view/669780
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Sep 27, 2009 5:21 PM #492689
I'm not big on the little pause you cut in there before the first punch.

not bad though. make more and I'll have more to crit without watching this 40 times to see something that easily could have been a little error and explain shit to you you might already know about.