Nor am I an expert, cause im also still trying to master the basics,
but one thing I do know is u have the arm process switched around...
the arm in the front that is about to go back is suppose to bend, not straighten
otherwise it looks like he has running arm motion, yet hes walking ._.
I have to say, ur one hell of a fast learner lol, ur probably improving faster then me even though I only pivot when im bored or if im in the mood
But yeah, good job dude... Pretty soon, us beginners would be up there with Zed CC'ing ppl instead of being CC'd, were making our way up lol
Hillshire farm!, GO NOOBS!!!