stick 'n' brick

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Oct 10, 2009 5:28 AM #498268
hi. just made this animation. i got EZ toons yesterday so im new. tell me what you think and post replies on how i can improve. thanks.

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Oct 10, 2009 3:37 PM #498419
Hey there. For what's presumably one of your first animations, this isn't bad, but you need to work on the stiffness of your figures. Use more frames and less noticeable movements to make everything flow and then your stuff will be more enjoyable to watch.
Also, carry on those particle dispersions for a few more frames. To me it seems like they're disappearing altogether far too quickly.
Having said that, you used some good effects like that spin when the dude was in the air. Good luck and continue animating! :]
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Oct 10, 2009 6:58 PM #498507
good efects and good easyng...
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Oct 10, 2009 9:47 PM #498578
Sweet Thanks!!!!
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Oct 15, 2009 6:28 PM #501156
Cool anim. You good.
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Oct 16, 2009 10:37 PM #501722
very good, just work on making it more smooth and fluid