Hey Neba here :o
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Nebakenezzer2Posts: 273
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View Profile the beam was the only bit that was off.
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Your effects got a bit bad, you should animate/post more.
lol now Im inspired to pivot for a day :P
bubblesBannedPosts: 1,633
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View Profile Thats pretty good, although there was only 1 thing I didn't like and that was the beam. My tip is... don't import beam effects, just make your own.
Avian2Posts: 1,773
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View Profile It's fine, it lacked easing at some parts though.
Draunia052Posts: 4
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View Profile The beam ruined it for me, otherwise nice little animation you got there.
Zed2Posts: 11,572
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View Profile I'd say, the second time the guy got kicked in the face he should have gone over backwards more and the guy who fell to the ground after the beam should have absorbed the impact more. The beam was off too. The force should have all gone in that one direction and dissipated from there instead of recoiling upwards.
Besides that it's a fine animation.
RedRavenRulerPosts: 3
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View Profile At first I thought the smoke explosion was a grenade >.< Maybe make the ground have a crater of some sorts where the beam hits? Not that I'm any better (you're in fact much better than I am) just my thoughts.
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View Profile The explosion was pretty great. Beam was pathetic. Stickmen movements were pretty good too.