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Nov 9, 2009 7:08 AM #511689
http://i103.photobucket.com/albums/m158/bobyoubob/itsbeenawhile.gif

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its been a while
CC please (:
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Nov 9, 2009 7:22 AM #511696
the beam was the only bit that was off.
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Nov 9, 2009 11:51 AM #511720
whoah hey neba
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Nov 9, 2009 10:41 PM #511892
what up gangstas :o
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Nov 9, 2009 11:03 PM #511908
=D

Your effects got a bit bad, you should animate/post more.
lol now Im inspired to pivot for a day :P
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Nov 10, 2009 4:16 PM #512113
Thats pretty good, although there was only 1 thing I didn't like and that was the beam. My tip is... don't import beam effects, just make your own.
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Nov 10, 2009 5:30 PM #512128
It's fine, it lacked easing at some parts though.
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Nov 10, 2009 7:14 PM #512141
The beam ruined it for me, otherwise nice little animation you got there.
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Nov 10, 2009 7:23 PM #512142
I'd say, the second time the guy got kicked in the face he should have gone over backwards more and the guy who fell to the ground after the beam should have absorbed the impact more. The beam was off too. The force should have all gone in that one direction and dissipated from there instead of recoiling upwards.

Besides that it's a fine animation.
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Nov 12, 2009 12:21 AM #512563
At first I thought the smoke explosion was a grenade >.< Maybe make the ground have a crater of some sorts where the beam hits? Not that I'm any better (you're in fact much better than I am) just my thoughts.
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Nov 13, 2009 3:16 PM #512955
The explosion was pretty great. Beam was pathetic. Stickmen movements were pretty good too.
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