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Dec 17, 2009 7:08 AM #525356
http://i-sneeze-colors.deviantart.com/art/Animate-147016377

Animate something in an hour. Go.
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Dec 17, 2009 8:25 AM #525368
I REALLY like your style, that was an awesome animation.
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Dec 17, 2009 8:28 AM #525369
Alright, time to slap on my criticism hat on.

First of all, my first impression is that it was "pretty nice style with an interesting blood style"

I liked how he eased out of the skating trick and fell, really smooth there and well eased but right at the end he looked like the gravity was changed and he forcefully hit the floor, and he didn't hit the floor properly I think. He kind of moved to the right a bit.

Secondly, the last stick figure dismembered with considerable wobbliness.

Otherwise, it's not bad for a one hour animation. Keep practicing. I like your style.
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Dec 17, 2009 9:48 AM #525371
New Generation. To people that don't look too hard into the animation about gravity and such and what not. I believe this would be surprisingly entertaining for them even for a short time. Your criticism is correct but I'm just putting these out for the pleasure, not the practice. Thanks though. <3
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Dec 17, 2009 10:33 AM #525372
Well Etch, it's pretty boring if we all just post saying "good job". If you post it here, expect both comments AND criticism.

That said, good job.
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Dec 17, 2009 7:34 PM #525440
Quote from Bonk
Well Etch, it's pretty boring if we all just post saying "good job". If you post it here, expect both comments AND criticism.

That said, good job.


This. I don't think I need to add anything onto that.

Practice is key.
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Dec 17, 2009 11:08 PM #525489
good job
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Dec 17, 2009 11:23 PM #525497
Thanks. :D
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