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Dec 25, 2009 1:11 AM #528280
Updating this thread alot now so yea keep coming back :D

http://filebox.me/view/k09xyfc0h arms are dumb...

http://filebox.me/view/jw998khh9
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Dec 25, 2009 2:57 AM #528313
not enough to c&c really. it doesn't even look like dancing yet.
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Dec 25, 2009 9:29 AM #528421
Its not dancing. Its just swaying there.
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Dec 25, 2009 1:44 PM #528504
it seems as if nearly every time her hand is quiet and gives a weird expression
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Dec 25, 2009 8:41 PM #528574
http://filebox.me/view/jw998khh9 update
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Dec 25, 2009 10:14 PM #528603
Make the arm parts the same color and remove the outline where they overlap so that it looks more together. Nice 3-D ishness goin on there.
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Dec 26, 2009 5:15 AM #528706
Quote from Coldzero
Its not dancing. Its just swaying there.

You animated a box... so don't complain.
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Dec 26, 2009 5:18 AM #528707
Quote from bloodwarrior
You animated a box... so don't complain.


Roger that Bloodwarrior. :3
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Dec 26, 2009 9:57 AM #528763
That's better! but try to rise the arms.
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Dec 30, 2009 6:13 AM #530452
ok..... its ok.......
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Dec 30, 2009 11:01 AM #530532
Here's a jolly grand idea before you continue this any further.
Hoow about sitting down, hitting yourself in the head for a second, play some music, and come up with an idea instead of saying "I'm going to animate a girl dancing". Anyone can do that.

It's obvious at this point that you animated the hair, added the chest piece, and then tweened the arm just so they were moving. It is also obvious that you had to plot or concept whatsoever of what you wanted the final product to look like.

I say start something different and actually make at least 80 frames of an animation before posting it. It will honestly help you if we have something to critisize you on rather than most noobs gagging over the fact that they can barely animate stick figures but you can do this.

It will help you in the long run to take my advice :/
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Jan 3, 2010 12:32 PM #532413
Its good. needs more work. its starting to creep me out...
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