C&C plz

good movements, but when the guy gets shot he should immediately hit the wall, in yours it's a bit slow.

hmmmm.... Im not to sure what you mean because 9mms arn't that strong. If it were a sniper then I would understand.....

It just looked kind of like he was floating for a second.

oooo yeah......... I see what you mean now.... He sorta slides into the wall.....

eh, needs a little work, mate. at the end when he puts his hand down, the gun moves? and the fall needs a bit of work. good start though; you could make a pretty decent animation off of that :D

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eh, needs a little work, mate. at the end when he puts his hand down, the gun moves? and the fall needs a bit of work. good start though; you could make a pretty decent animation off of that :D

About the gun moving.... well shit!!!! I did not think anyone would notice that!

Yeah... the fall needs alot of work.

Its all about detail Zer0.
xD

Anyway , you should post this in the beginner section.
Why? :O
It's chopy , Physics where horrible , It's stiff.
That's it.
Next time add a little blood if you can , and watch some tutorials or real life videos and try to remake that. :D

Good luck!

-.-

thanks poppet.... thanks

i looked at it the first few times and loved it, it looks very realistic, but upon closer examination i noticed a few problems; however, my only complaints are small ones:

- the shooter's legs are completely stationary the entire time, they should be more dynamic
- the victim shouldn't move upwards like he does; his feet shout stay on the ground and his head should snap back more instead of pulling his whole body with him, then just fall back
- victims legs slide around a bit when he falls over
- bullet casing moves too quickly, needs more hang time and a slower fall


fix all of these and it will be perfect

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It's chopy , Physics where horrible , It's stiff.

how about no

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i looked at it the first few times and loved it, it looks very realistic, but upon closer examination i noticed a few problems; however, my only complaints are small ones:

- the shooter's legs are completely stationary the entire time, they should be more dynamic
- the victim shouldn't move upwards like he does; his feet shout stay on the ground and his head should snap back more instead of pulling his whole body with him, then just fall back
- victims legs slide around a bit when he falls over
- bullet casing moves too quickly, needs more hang time and a slower fall


fix all of these and it will be perfect




how about no

Why thank you ^_^

I wont be fixing it because I'm making a game at the moment but ill make a nre one later =D

should I post it in the begginers?

The only thing other then what scarecrow pointed out is his back is pretty awkward if you ask me it looks like he just got punched (the shooter)

mmmm..... true... theres to much kick back and its not in the right place...

Thanks ^_^

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should I post it in the begginers?

make a walk cycle and then i'll answer this question

based on that animation, i can't tell whether or not you've gotten the hang of this yet.

what you've done is a very simple, basic animation; one that any self-respecting stick figure animator, beginner or otherwise, should be able to pull off nicely. however, 99% of them can't, because 99% of stick figure animators are completely retarded

as such, you've shown me that you aren't completely retarded, but that doesn't tell me whether or not you should be posting in the beginner's thread (because it is still a very basic animation).

make something less simple (like a walk cycle, as i said earlier) if you want us to be able to judge your abilities properly.

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The only thing other then what scarecrow pointed out is his back is pretty awkward if you ask me it looks like he just got punched (the shooter)

i think that's because the legs didn't move. if they had, it would have looked more like recoil than having been punched

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how about no

I say Yes , But Hay!
If you think your right , Your right.