The artistry is good. The shading was well placed and the backgrounds were well drawn. The storyline got a smile, but it wasn't quite laugh quality.

Yes, the story does seems to have a missing quallity to make it hillarious, thank you again for your critic, i really appreciate it :)

I think if you had some better material this would actually be pretty great. The art is great, but the storyline was mehish. Keep it up though, I expect to see some good shit out of you.

Graphics were great,but I kinda don't understand the second to the last tile. Still very nice. :]

i can't tell if it was an accident that he threw the ball too far away or if he was being a dick

no he threw it at a tree and it bounced off and hit him

i think that panel is a bit unclear, it would be funnier if i didn't have to try and figure out what was going on there

Tell me about it. Thanks to 2-D, I finally get it.

Your comics is very good, he had a little bit of things but it's very good anyway :Smile: You're a very good artist !

Quote from Scarecrow

no he threw it at a tree and it bounced off and hit him

i think that panel is a bit unclear, it would be funnier if i didn't have to try and figure out what was going on there

oh ,

Quote from 2-D

i can't tell if it was an accident that he threw the ball too far away or if he was being a dick

laughed at that ^_^...

Thanks you guys! now i know it's still unclear... it's my first time doing a comic without any speech, so i still need some pointers
Anymore critics? :D