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Feb 5, 2010 6:01 PM #543899
cause I'd never do this

http://tawnik.xf.cz/WalkcycleP.mov

http://tawnik.xf.cz/walkcycleS.mov

without your help, thank you guys.
Uhm, I also have to show you the front view, which I have to work on, because it looks "weird" compared to those two that Im really happy with..

http://tawnik.xf.cz/walkcycleF.mov

Ive spent two days on it so far =) Hope you liked it, any comments or critique will be appreciated !!

http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8p.mov
http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8s.mov
http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8f.mov
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Feb 5, 2010 6:09 PM #543904
I hope your going far with this, because I'm imaging you making an epic animated movie and getting like 504128 million dollars. But seriously, keep doing this and you'll reach far.
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Feb 6, 2010 12:12 AM #543975
Wow, I love it. The only issue I can see immediately is that the toes come up a bit too high on the step. Unless you're doing it for cartoonish effect, it doesn't match the serious and reserved arm swings.
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Feb 6, 2010 12:28 AM #543977
If feel like there's something wrong with his left hand as it comes back, I can't quite put my finger on it...

Other than that, fantastic.
Oh and his hands go through his legs...
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Feb 6, 2010 5:31 AM #544017
oh very nice... nice attention to detail. Hands don't look relaxed, but who cares. lol
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Feb 6, 2010 11:03 AM #544117
Thanks,

FoShizzle, I ♥ $
Bonk, I will check it out and sum up my feelings about it, I was looking for more realistic look.
Vendetta, Miccool, I was looking for "loose" and relaxed look, so I will have to work on them, since this is my best so far I will definitely keep editing it till I **** it up as the others :D

and if possible, tell me what view and what frame do you think ruins the feeling for the arms, I notice that theres some jerking when the left arm comes forward and yeah I see the hands coming through or near by the legs..
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Feb 6, 2010 1:47 PM #544154
http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8p.mov
http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8s.mov
http://tawnik.xf.cz/WC8f.mov
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Feb 6, 2010 3:12 PM #544181
It's so close to perfection. There's just one tiny issue, and that's that he isn't walking at a constant speed. If you imagine that platform he's on is a treadmill, it would have to be stopping every time he gets to the end of his stride because the foot comes to a halt while it's still on the ground. He needs to lift that foot just a bit earlier so that when it starts moving forwards it's left the ground already and isn't going to be tripping him up.

Besides that, it's some brilliant work. Keep it up.
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Feb 6, 2010 3:26 PM #544182
You're right, I didnt think it will be a problem, but it is.. thanks for pointing it out :)
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Feb 7, 2010 9:49 AM #544399
none of your links are loading, bro.
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Feb 7, 2010 1:34 PM #544448
Ive checked them today, they're working fine for me, are you using google chrome, mozzila or something else ?
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Feb 7, 2010 5:57 PM #544538
looks like textbook animation to me, I don't see any problems :)
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Feb 14, 2010 3:51 PM #546785
Great .
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