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Mar 2, 2010 2:16 AM #552349
This may be my new samurai Comp entry if it turns out how I want it to
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Besides the fact that the Foot placement is HORRIBLE I think it looks awesome :3
And With the arms after he fell I wanted to see If I could Make things Flow
And
OMFG it worked
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Mar 2, 2010 11:27 AM #552424
Hi there,

two big things that I notice
1. the poses that the attacker is in is un natural and looks very stiff and random
2. when the attacked guy stands back up it should be faster, delete a frame or two in the middle

also the whole thing could be faster a lil bit, if 10 is normal speed, that Id like it to be and 1 is slowmotion then your animation is 7-8 :)

Hope I helped you.
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Mar 2, 2010 7:52 PM #552461
I guess, basically, I second what Tawnik said. Maybe a wider stance when he stops moving would be better, because as it is it looks off balance to the left. Not one of your best, I think, but still reasonable.
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Mar 3, 2010 4:28 AM #552605
cool :3
good job, mate :D
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Mar 7, 2010 10:19 AM #553877
Nice... LOL I'M DUMB! I'm barely new to this and I'm criticizing and making a fool of my self by extending emotiones too much!
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Mar 12, 2010 4:22 AM #555275
This Animation Is based off of an animation on DD....I thought It was funny when I saw It so I tried my own Version xD

The word at the end is my new LOGO!!!!!
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Now can I please have some C&C :3
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Mar 12, 2010 4:32 PM #555375
The good guy was off balance when he leant back, and the foot placement looked a little shaky. And it was a dd idea so it's intrinsically bad :P

Pretty cool effect on the M.
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Mar 14, 2010 3:55 PM #555958
Thanks Zed...

But since My thread is Dieing I NEED MORE COMMENTS!
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Mar 14, 2010 4:11 PM #555966
It was good, more updates!!
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Mar 16, 2010 10:41 PM #556646
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Yes A random Combo...
With
A New BASE!?!?!?!
his name is Typo :3
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Mar 17, 2010 8:20 AM #556766
Clear your inbox, I need to send you something...

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Mar 17, 2010 5:14 PM #556827
Holy crap when did you get so good?
damn I really havn't been here in a long time.
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Mar 19, 2010 10:00 PM #557428
ANOTHERE ANIMATION!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I figured out how to flow my runs :3
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Mar 19, 2010 10:05 PM #557430
It's all brilliant, except I think the runs need longer strides.
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Mar 20, 2010 4:48 AM #557532
I honestly agree about the strands.
But I kinda like them :T
Can you show me how you run then Ill expirement with it :3.

I wanna see : p