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Feb 10, 2010 7:05 AM #545452
Ok within the last few months I've become a large manga and anime fan.
I was a fan before, but now it's a bit stronger.

I'm seriously addicted.
So badly that I've been dreaming in anime. One night I had such a great dream story, that I couldn't give it up. So, I chose to write it down. A week later I had to design a world for a fantasy assignment in my writting class. I made a descript world which is based apon what I wrote down, somehow, I got an A on that assignment. And I feel victorious, so I've decided that I want to make an actual manga based on it. I believe it to be pretty original to almost any manga, but keeps many of the same themes and ideas that many mangas have. I would be very interested in artists and writers that would like to collaborate with me. I would be very happy if the artists would commit to part of a volume.
Anyone can help in some way,
Either by changing somehing that is unliked or something like that.

Time Setting:Medeivel Japan or Europe, your pick

Natural Setting:A Group of Small Villages

Worlds:

Natural Earth:
The Earth that we have all come to know and love. Accessible to other worldly creatures.

Otherworldly Earth:
A spirit, monster, demon, goblin, fantasy beast filled world. The creatures here are almost invulnerable to natural human contact. Accesible to humans.. There are cities where humans live in this world. Humans and otherworldy creatures have learned to live together somewhat. There are still some creatures who hate the human race, and vice versa.

Some of the basic plot of the first few stories:
Samuel, the son of a man who is secretly an (assasin?) in the two worlds, is 17 and lives with his father in a small village. One day, Samuel spots a strange looking tattoo'd man talking to his father. Within a second, he sees his father brutally slaughtered by this man and his blade. The man looks back spotting Samuel. Samuel turns away, as to pretend he wasn't looking. He hears the man talking to him. Turning around he noticed within the three seconds he had been turned around, the man had gotten close to him. The man tells him that he must be Samuel. Samuel looks toward the man and asks why he had done what he had done to his father. The man tells him that his father had made mistakes, and that he had been lying to Samuel all of his life. He said if Samuel wanted to know the truth, he would seek him out.Samuel then attempts to strike the man as he had become upset. Samuel then wakes up, believing that this was all some strange dream, he goes out looking for his father, he doesn't find him. he realizes thathe hadn't dreamt, and his father was gone. He panicked and went out for his friend( a man who had ben friends with Samuel all of his life since grade school. He is big into the occult)
He finds his friend and explains to him what had happened. He tells about the slaying of his father and the tattoo'd man. His friend tells him that the description of the man is otherworldly, and there are only five pieces(some golden some silver) which can get you to and from the otherworld. He pulls out a book. He shows Samuel a page of a book which has the pictures of the pieces. Samuel instantly recognizes a piece. His father had given it to him to hide a year back. He told him that it was a valuable object. Samuel explained this to his friend. His friend was surprised. He then brought his friend to the exact place in which he had buried it. they dug until they hit a stone box. They opened the box to find the piece missing. Samuel then becomes enraged. His friend tries to calm him down, but something happens. Samuel appears to become a smaller bit stronger. His eyes become white and his face becomes split in half by a black streak which runs down the middle of it. His friend trys to restrain him, but somehow he immobilizes his friend, His friend then starts drawing symbols into the dirt and pours a liquid from his bag into it. The dirt changes to become a complete black color. His friend then throws it at Samuel before Samuel can get out into town to damage anyone. The dirt mixture then grows to cover Samuel completely. IT then hardens for a few minutes. Samuel trys to struggle out of it, but he can't. HE falls to the ground and the mixture continues to cover him until he is completely covered. Onceit is apparent thst Samuel has passed out, his friend commands the mixture to release. He then runs toward samuel and listens to hear if Samuel is alive. Once he confirms this, he drags Samuel back to his house and rolls him onto a couch. He then goes to sleep for the rest of the night.


And then from there on Samuel and his friend search the country for the other pieces. Each of which are known to be around a general area if they are in this world...
Oh and Samuel doesn't get his powers from any curse,
his father actually married an otherworldly humanoid type creature, which when angry would go into five stages of transformation, Samuel of which only entered stage one. Due to the fact that once you hit stage five you have the possibility of dying, and also due to the fact that the humanoid creatures were very powerful and in constant war, they have gone extinct and Samuel is the last of his kind. His father had hidden this from him for all of his life as his mother had died at his birth due to problems in the birthing process.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:07 AM #545456
Could I be one of the people to draw it?
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Feb 10, 2010 7:10 AM #545458
Yeah, you can.
I was thinking about making a website for it. And then after a few stories, if it gains popularity, get it published.

Sounds like normal Japanese manga cheesy stuff, eh

oh and are you artistically talented in the anime field?
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Feb 10, 2010 7:17 AM #545465
Yeah. I'll post some samples in a second.

Also, I was thinking of the same thing a while ago, I really wanted to make some awesome manga with a kickass story line.

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Recent work I guess, I originally wanted to make them into Flash characters and animate them, that's why they are kind of simple.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:19 AM #545467
but fo shizzle.... you dont has a tablet?
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Feb 10, 2010 7:23 AM #545472
I can scan my work on my pc, duh.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:24 AM #545474
Yeah,

Do you think this storyline's any good?

zerogravity,

you has a tablet and be willin to help?

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Foshizzle, great work,
I really like it.
It will have to be simple and black and white anyways, because we will be pumping out issues almost as fast as we write them, so simple is fine.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:30 AM #545477
Well, I didn't really like the Afterlife earth part, sounds like Soul Eater. I say, first we need to make some sort of a happy introduction, then something happens and the hero (main character) has to take revenge upon it. He also gets sick powers an shit and meets new people to join him at his quest to kill that or what ever it may be. I also didn't really like the Demon part, could have done like a tribe of people that carry a curse or something?
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Feb 10, 2010 7:30 AM #545478
Can I help with the story? I'm very good at coming up with names.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:39 AM #545480
Quote from FoShizzle
Well, I didn't really like the Afterlife earth part, sounds like Soul Eater. I say, first we need to make some sort of a happy introduction, then something happens and the hero (main character) has to take revenge upon it. He also gets sick powers an shit and meets new people to join him at his quest to kill that or what ever it may be. I also didn't really like the Demon part, could have done like a tribe of people that carry a curse or something?

Yeah I didn't really want the afterlife part either, I just wanted a way to bring people back to life.

Well,
I can make the curse give him a godly ammount of power, but at the same time kill him, and then he somehow finds a way later in the story to keep his powers, or some shit like that. Yeah the demons can change too. I would much rather have a tribe,
but the tribe must be strangely creepy and carry high ammounts of power.

The whole beginning can be happy, as the main character can be wanting to get into the other world for bussiness. Or something of the rather. Maybe he has friends there that he can't wait to see, or maybe his family is there waiting to meet him?
And when he gets there, he finds that through some bad bussiness deal itami wants to kill his family, and he gets there to find his parents being slaughtered.

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Can I help with the story? I'm very good at coming up with names.

yes
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Feb 10, 2010 7:42 AM #545481
We can do something like, he didn't see his mom ever since he was born. His dad told him she died, but he didn't give up and he was sure that his mom was in the other world thing. as he wants to get to that other world, he goes through srs shit, like new enemies and friends. YES I'M LOVIN THIS
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Feb 10, 2010 7:48 AM #545486
That could work aswell. And he gets attacked, and the old lady comes, and then they find that she has a hot daughter, because all mangas need some hot chicks and love interests for the protagonist.

I do have some bloodlust though and would like to see him meet his mother only for her to be killed.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:50 AM #545487
we could maybe do like.. this gate, that has been built by the government that takes you to the other world, and you can only go through that to get to the other world.
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Feb 10, 2010 7:54 AM #545490
Ehhh,
that almost sounds like oblivion. We need some way other than magic to the other world...
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Feb 10, 2010 7:58 AM #545491
Hm.. maybe, we can do something like this..
the curse of that tribe makes you dream about random clips that apper out of no where, it could resemble a puzzle. Maybe, we can make the hero solves it, it does something colorful and poof, he is in the other world? :D
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