Long time, no anim.

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Apr 18, 2008 9:30 PM #117512

Yeah, I wasn't showing my anims public lately. There was all too short. This is shortie too, but whatever. Give me C&C, feedback and that kind of thing =D
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Apr 18, 2008 9:33 PM #117514

Choppy, and the beginning, something weird happens before he jumps.

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Apr 18, 2008 10:15 PM #117556

Choppy and stiff.
More anticipation for that flip.

And the jump in the air was really bad. I've seen your previous animations; I'm quite sure you can do better than this.

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Apr 18, 2008 10:50 PM #117576

Choppy? I don't find it choppy and all. But thanks for ya' comments anyway.

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Apr 18, 2008 10:55 PM #117580

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Choppy? I don't find it choppy and all. But thanks for ya' comments anyway.

Look closely at the upward motion on the jump. It skips. Perhaps double framed.

Other than that, not so bad.

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Apr 18, 2008 11:57 PM #117662

Hey Cai. Haven't spoke in a while. I agree with the others. The movements arent really that bad, I like em. The bdouble framing at the start is a bit too much though, and it looks choppy. Less d-framing pL0x.

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Apr 19, 2008 1:32 AM #117839

i liked it heaps

good easing and smooth!