hell, that's ideal for me right now. you can go first this time if you want

I challenge anyone, and put me in...

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yo, someone can challenge me if they want. i'm trying to train up my lyricism for this come april

Hey I'll do a battle too, but you will slaughter me. I need to improve my rheumatics anyways because I am actually becoming passionate about rapping.

i might do yours after ogrilla's

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yo, someone can challenge me if they want. i'm trying to train up my lyricism for this come april

You don't need lyrics.

They're accepting instrumentals.

I'd like to join the textcee shit. I've been netceeing for a while now; I feel ready.

I challenge you, a kindly gentleman.

Prepare to lose. 4 bars sound reasonable?

If you mean four rounds, then I must say raise it to ten.

ooo, big spender

No I mean 4 bars what the ****. But fine, I can go ten. You want to drop? Say House Rules?

Dude don't use that random slang that I've never heard of before, seriously. I'll go first, I was unaware that there were rules at all.
I'll keep it nice and simple for this round.

All night, persuading who's not right.
To see the light, in hopes that they might.
Chose not to fight and discover that it can be all alright.
They just have to consider what they can do,
although it's something new, and they're confused,
they're not used to.
I will implicate, citate;
and destroy what they need to concentrate, and complicate.
While they try to congregate.

It's creativity, though some can't see it coming from me.
I'll try my best to be an M.C.
It's creativity, can't you all see?
Just look at it, you're all living a dream.

Do you enjoy your thoughts so pristine?
Untouched, clean?
Some people don't know what I mean, but when they do;
They all change it seems.
It's like speaking without words,
speaking without breathing,
or speaking without thinking.
My words can be as sharp as a sword,
or as dull as a grain of sand,
I comprehend and remand, demand, and;
put them into a mentality that they've ignored, and don't really understand.
Like they don't have time, they can't afford,
I don't understand how they can life so bored.

It's creativity, though some can't see it coming from me.
I'll try my best to be an M.C.
It's creativity, can't you all see?
Just look at it, you're all living a dream.

Just think before you opinionate;
and realize that life is as serene as you want it to be.
Rarely without consent do people intervene.
It's like watching an accident happen right before your eyes,
It's just a disguise a visage,
slander and lies.
to disturb it ever so calm, yet you notice something's wrong.
It was your doing all along.
How could this happen to me,
there was no way I could possibly foresee,
this happening.
Go ahead and and say what you mean,
but you were the one poisoning your own dream.
You know what I mean?


Edit; I looked up what bars are, and hell no. I am way to long winded for anything that short.

So sorry I haven't posted anything yet. I've been out of it lately. Spring break = partying... :/

What the **** is this, I have to battle this asshole ten ****ING TIMES?
He can't even drop bars or rhymes, I said 10 bars he dropped like 400,000 lines

Honestly, that wasn't even relevant, and it was wack, face it you cant rap
Did that thing even have a chorus? Just ... What the **** WAS THAT?

I thought you'd drop a battle peace, you batty crease, you fake as **** MC
I've come to murder this thief, rip him a new asshole from his lungs to his knees

No homo, honestly - your so shit I think you should end it all, commit suicide
That was a song ... This is a rap battle thread, my hope in humanity just died

I'm not even trying, but **** it - I'll drop some actual bars so I win faster
Next time Jutsu write some good, and for gods sakes try to come harder..

If you were 'Employed To Put Lids On Gladware Bowls & Cups' you wouldn't have "Multi-Sealables''
So I'm gonna have to tutor you, obviously your situations ****ing critical

No, this battle is so one-sided, he dropped a poem and I dropped a rap it aint fair
And for that reason you'll be all over the walls, you'll need that universal healthcare

I'm keystyling this, so you know its shit and to me its not a matter of urgency
My shits ill, it gave you HIV and left you pukin on the curtains in accident and emergency

9 bars in, I know they aint good but **** I have to do this again NINE MORE TIMES?
Thats insane, so instead after this I'll drop a poem **** writing more lines and rhymes

You wouldn't have the key to find victory if it was a location on a map
I bet thats a played line, so its a shame J, How I'll take the win with that


Thats my 10 bars. Only about 2 I spent any time on. How the **** did this guy get 4 points when he drops ****ing poems? This isn't a battle thread he doesnt even know what a ****ing bar is