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Apr 1, 2010 8:23 PM #562272
Sumfink's Easytoon and Pencil thread. Pencil is like Flash, but free and without tweening. Download it here- http://www.pencil-animation.org/

http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270150417 Latest. Done right after I got my tablet.
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270150348 Slightly newer. First Pencil anim worth posting.
http://img706.imageshack.us/img706/5656/crazyshtuff.gif Very old. Last EZToon anim before I switched to Pencil.
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Apr 3, 2010 1:47 AM #562891
...anyone? Or should I post in Beginners?
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Apr 3, 2010 7:27 AM #562991
The particles were pretty good. You might want to work on everything else.
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Apr 4, 2010 1:25 AM #563380
Somehow I thought you would say that.
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Apr 5, 2010 8:05 AM #564096
The top one looked good, particles were nice.
Second one was not as nice, particles of that size and type look better if the break up as the diminish.
The easytoon one wasn't that great though, The particles were really wobbly and need alot of easing. Also try not to draw particles with a size 2 brush or higher, it doesn't quite look right with size one particles.

I'd like to see you do some stick work, then I'll judge you as to whether your begginers or not.
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Apr 5, 2010 11:42 AM #564145
Alright, thanks. New anim pending.

Last two are incredibly old though, like a month or three. I've gotten better.
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Apr 5, 2010 7:47 PM #564281
Kewl, I look forward to seeing your new work.
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Apr 5, 2010 7:54 PM #564284
The first one was nice until it took the loop into the ground.
I want to see your stickfigure work as well.
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Apr 8, 2010 12:19 AM #565362
The particles were a bit lazed, Umm theres not much movement to all of them, they mostly turn into particles and move, (the particles disperse while there still pretty big) otherwise not bad, you dont need the beginners thread.
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Apr 8, 2010 12:21 AM #565365
You seem to have great potential, but I'd like to see more movement, less effects
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Apr 8, 2010 12:28 AM #565367
Quote from kixen2
The particles were a bit lazed, Umm theres not much movement to all of them, they mostly turn into particles and move, (the particles disperse while there still pretty big) otherwise not bad, you dont need the beginners thread.
kixen? where were you.
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Apr 8, 2010 12:57 AM #565385
Thanks much, guys. I'm working on a big FB project, I'll post a spoiler...
http://www.swfcabin.com/open/1270685341
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Apr 8, 2010 6:20 AM #565568
Looks nice, Great having another easytooner in the barn.
I think it might be better if you draw simple stick figures for now. The effects are pretty good and I see you definately become a lot better in the future!
Good work!

EDIT:
Just saw your last post, Looking good so far... But not much to judge from just one movement, eah?
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Apr 8, 2010 7:50 AM #565592
Good particles, nothing else to comment on really. Make it move more!
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