tell me what you think and tell me the problems

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Apr 17, 2010 10:23 PM #571159

[video]http://tinypic.com/player.php?v=11wd37n&s=5[/video]

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Apr 17, 2010 10:51 PM #571170

my next one [video]http://tinypic.com/player.php?v=14sywes&s=5[/video]

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Apr 18, 2010 11:02 AM #571450

Focus less on story and more on basic movements. You need to show every part of a movement too before ending it. Read this: http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?25590-Pivot-for-Beginners

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Apr 18, 2010 3:49 PM #571601

thank you zed i will try better