Well I actually posted this on DA several days ago, but never got around to posting it here.

Was wondering if it's good enough for official (will have FLA done once I get out of lazy mode)

http://cronosxiii.deviantart.com/art/Stickpage-Introduction-160801565

just wantin more cc

Takes too long man. The first two shots are ok, but after that....

Remember it's just an intro.

yeah. I kept thinking that.

Yeah, good animation but an intro should usually end with the letters intact, or at least legible.

After the gun arm thingy falls just leave it there. It's far too long at the moment.

I think it's good enough for an official intro. A bit too long, though. Might want to edit it a bit if you can.

nice and simple effect with the blur also i like the recoil of the cannon and I agree with bubbles the ending part was too long and unnecessary.
but is your intro and you decide how to do it , just very good work.

Yeah, ill see if I can shorten it. Thanks.

Quote from Bonk

just make them explode or something.

Way to make me sad, asshole.

alright this one's from me :)
http://www.filz.us/view/b14f68f3-b04/

if you wanna watch it, .swf file is here:
http://bbhsn98.deviantart.com/art/NFSTR-like-Intro-Stickpage-394943151?ga_submit_new=10%253A1377118834