For a first timer your doing better than when I first started x3
Now then
Im gonna give some short C&C
Your first hit had no type of force in falcon pawnch.
-maybe double frame,or add a tremor
When the person was thrown off the screen I think that looked pretty cool.
-nice Job
The particles were..bad.
Following Fo shizzles tut is nice and all. But you have to expirement with it.
If you really want to make your explosions really nice try watching youtube videos of easytooners
(Some how there are some pretty good people up there)
Watch there explosions and if you think there versions were good enough then you keep trying.......
-the reason why the explosion was bad was because The particles didnt look right. they vanished correctly on the outside.But on the inside it seemed like there was nouthing in there.
On the sword practince
It was alright
-Before each slash there should be a bit more anticipation.Like add him moveing in a bit more before the complete dash....
Youll get the hang of it. It's the easyest effect yet.
just keep practicing.
Judjing by how good these are youll be an excellent easytooner in no time :3
Good luck.
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