Yes, it doesn't look right. Maybe it's the lack of force in the "Hammer fall".

At the top, he should linger a bit longer. Also, during the descent, the force/speed remained equal. It should go more slow-fast. This would make it look more natural. In the final flip leading into the top of the jump, his upper body should be swinging a bit faster. Otherwise, it looks great!

WOW someone closer to my level, it's cool, not the effects i would have chosen, but they were good, and i liked the consistency of the size of the guy

Courtacy? http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?33063-Banekai-s-Long-awaited-(-by-me-)-easytoon-thread&p=578394#post578394

Comrade! Haha. Your animations are nice, but your effects just irk me 'cuz I do them slightly different.

Hey, Banekai, why don't you try to replicate my basic animation up there?
It'll give you something to do, and I wanna see how it'll look in your style.

You need more extreme easing in the fall and the jump. A long drawn-out crouch would help alot with force.

Thank you.

I made one. Although it might not be what you wanted.
http://www.fileize.com/view/47b70c29-57c/