the introduction looks ok
but I don't know the story, or what you really wanted to do with it, so..

As said before this is the introduction, so the part that contains the story is not done yet, but it's simple, this three sticks: Joshua (already in the anim), Wolfos, and Somnus will fight together to defeat some other sticks and at the end they'll try to kill the boss (their master)...... XD I won't tell you what will happen at the end XD

When I finish with the introduction i'll start with the story part.