Gun shot!

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dawG
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Apr 22, 2008 7:12 PM #120987
Hi guys, I just started this anim today! :b

Should I continue?

http://antiup.net/view.php?id=9614466635Gun%20pwns.swf

Btw fps: 14

Edit: http://antiup.net/view.php?id=40215553454Gun%20pwns.swf

Fps noaw: 12
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Apr 22, 2008 7:26 PM #120988
Looks nice. Not much to crit on. The brain comin out of his head didn't look right. It'd make more sense if his head was torn open first. Other than that, very nice. Continue.
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Apr 22, 2008 7:41 PM #120993
I like it, very well done, as ssOutPhase said not much to critique because it's good already, but just for curiosity...what is left there to continue?
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Apr 22, 2008 8:16 PM #121001
Thx guys :D

Well Drifts your kinda right, I can't actually continue this..
lol
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Apr 22, 2008 8:50 PM #121009
Imo you should ease the fall more.
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Apr 22, 2008 8:52 PM #121010
Reminds me of Unreal Tournament 4 when you shoot them their brain comes out of nowhere.
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Apr 22, 2008 10:32 PM #121063
lol kinto, dont liek the fall, but i suppose it depends on the intened style, it looks pretty bouncy, which i liek. Might not pass with others though.
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Apr 22, 2008 11:10 PM #121087
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Imo you should ease the fall more.


What? The fall was way too slow already.

In my opinion, that was the worst part. He got shot, quickly felt recoil, and then slowly fell backwards. The speed change from fast to not so fast was the problem.

Some exit blood spray would be nice as well. Just off set it from the impact blood by 1 frame.
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Apr 24, 2008 11:00 AM #122315
Yes I think u should continue coz it looks pretty sweet like the background
it looks pretty good nice work
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Apr 24, 2008 7:02 PM #122567
Thanks for the comments guys :D

I edited it take a look.
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Apr 24, 2008 9:01 PM #122619
Haha, I didn't realise what the brain was till i actually thought about it :P but i think you should keep it because it adds to the comedy :P