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Frank'd

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Feb 5, 2012 8:56 PM #588504
Lately i've been so busy animation has become a second priority, but here you can check out some of my work and tests!
http://www.fileize.com/view/8ef5aa21-565/
http://www.fileize.com/view/b990ebfe-7e3/
http://www.fileize.com/view/bc8a6c50-444/
http://www.fileize.com/view/f1fb5893-fce/
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KTCYb-2uD7k&list=UU_WBJoFpFzEDIIHE4srjuUA&index=21&feature=plcp

Keep updated! MIGHT make some more tests eventually~
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Feb 6, 2012 3:55 AM #588614
Bawllin' anims man. ;)

but of course, you already knew that.

STYLE! is finally all here! (unless flax isn't yet :o) (**friend request me**)
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Feb 6, 2012 2:28 PM #588753
-nice movements, a bit too fast though o:>
-I really like exercise 19
-that explosion is sick!
-damn! o_o
-cant watch that video in my country D:

nice to see you around Frank <3
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Feb 6, 2012 2:39 PM #588754
-A bit confusing since you first had slippery floor, then you just made it look like there was intense friction. o.o
-Loved it.
-Explosion-jizz! But, it was quite wobbly at the top.
-<3 Flux
-I love it. Nice shading, too. :)
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Feb 6, 2012 2:45 PM #588757
that "yeeah" goop, was the definition of sexy
nice job
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Feb 6, 2012 4:34 PM #588819
I've always loved your easing and style.
You sir, are one of my favorites <3
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Feb 6, 2012 5:57 PM #588868
that explosion O_O and that effects(like goop) omg
Nice anims
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Feb 7, 2012 11:59 AM #589333
Skyyppeeeee NAO

Glad the otter had finally joined :)
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Feb 7, 2012 8:18 PM #589571
Wow these tests are freaking good man, your explosions are epic !
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Feb 7, 2012 10:23 PM #589629
thanks guys for your ongoing support!
what would be of me without you lot? :,)
im gonna try and make something as soon as i can, i promess!
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Feb 8, 2012 4:25 AM #589765
These anims. Are good.
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Feb 8, 2012 2:21 PM #590009
The first two animations weren't very good to be honest. You hive nice movements and good speed, but you need more frames in a lot of areas.
It looks like you're just making them slide around which isn't good. In the one where he turns into liquid and reforms was decent I suppose. I loved the particle effects and how you animated the reformation, but it looks like you didn't even know what was going to happen when you started animating, so you improvised.

The explosion wasn't very good at all. Very wobbly and way to fast. Not enough force either. I didn't get the vibe that holy shit something just blew up.
Why would the flare be on the edge of the smoke clouds? That implies that the explosion originated from the corners instead of in the bottom, that isn't good either. It's very unrealistic.
I do like the colors you used on it though, and how you shaded the smoke cloud. I'm going to have to try that sometime.

As for your suicide animation, I liked the movements, they weren't bad, but you still need more frames in some areas. Not as many issues as the first animation you posted though.

You've got amazing potential and ability, I'll be sure to look at your future animations.
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Feb 9, 2012 6:07 PM #590851
Wow guys thanks for starting a discussion in my thread...
that's always lovely

if you are still willing to confront each other because of dumb reasons, try using personal messages
trust me, its better than explaining your points of view in a random thread...
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Feb 9, 2012 7:16 PM #590871
Cronos, nah man his constructive criticism was ok. CC is always good, Arch-Angel was just a little harsh, that's all.

And also maybe a little inexperienced because that explosion was fucking sexy!
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Feb 10, 2012 12:08 AM #591036
Quote from Frank'd
Wow guys thanks for starting a discussion in my thread...
that's always lovely

if you are still willing to confront each other because of dumb reasons, try using personal messages
trust me, its better than explaining your points of view in a random thread...


Yeah sorry about that. I did have a response written to Cronos' last comment, but I decided it was best not to post it considering it would be rude to derail your thread in such a way.
He's not worth a pm either so :/

Look below.

Quote from Nutcracker
Cronos, nah man his constructive criticism was ok. CC is always good, Arch-Angel was just a little harsh, that's all.

And also maybe a little inexperienced because that explosion was fucking sexy!


I'm harsh because I want people to make sure they understand my points. I never want my criticism to be taken as flaming or trolling, that is counterproductive.
Also, how's this for inexperienced:

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Hopefully this helps convey my point. The bottom portion of your explosion where it started did flare, which is good. Having the upper portion flare up isn't good because it basically like saying it's exploding again, but there is no force and there aren't any additional movements. If you take my second drawing where it has the point of origin and the arrows pointing outward, imagine that happening at the three locations where your explosion flares up. There has to be something causing the flare, in your case there is not.
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