Your Stickpage name: Ashlander
What is your personality?: Honorable, will help anybody with anything i can.
What is your physical body like?: Tall, Blond, athletic build. Physically tough guy.
What is your job?: Head of Security, or Security Guard (either one)
Why are you here?: Just transferred from a different space station due to excessive force charges.
Space Station. A story of horror, suspense, mystery and betrayal.
Started by: Devour | Replies: 92 | Views: 8,422
Feb 8, 2012 12:04 AM #589681
Feb 8, 2012 12:36 AM #589692
You're in as the head of security.
Feb 8, 2012 3:46 PM #590049
Awsome, I've always wanted to be a mad scientist
What is your stickpage name? Bubbles
What is your job? Human DNA alterer
What is your personality? Overly dramatic, often braking out into fits of evil laughter over mundain things, and making long speeches about the transformation of flesh whenever I alter another, even if its just a vaccination.
What is you physical attire like? Think measly doctor, skinny but able to transform myself with the ungodly powers of science!
Why are you here? After being convicted of mutating several animals (cats, dogs, hamsters etc) into horrific flesh eating monsters in the name of science, and inadvertently causing the brutal deaths of several people, I was given a life sentence. However I continued my marvelous work on inmates. Discovering this they sentenced me to death. The SSS however offered me a deal, they recruit me thus saving my life, as long as I don't experiment on any of my colleagues.
Obviously I excepted, it was a chance to expand my work. After all, alien life forms aren't colleagues...
What is your stickpage name? Bubbles
What is your job? Human DNA alterer
What is your personality? Overly dramatic, often braking out into fits of evil laughter over mundain things, and making long speeches about the transformation of flesh whenever I alter another, even if its just a vaccination.
What is you physical attire like? Think measly doctor, skinny but able to transform myself with the ungodly powers of science!
Why are you here? After being convicted of mutating several animals (cats, dogs, hamsters etc) into horrific flesh eating monsters in the name of science, and inadvertently causing the brutal deaths of several people, I was given a life sentence. However I continued my marvelous work on inmates. Discovering this they sentenced me to death. The SSS however offered me a deal, they recruit me thus saving my life, as long as I don't experiment on any of my colleagues.
Obviously I excepted, it was a chance to expand my work. After all, alien life forms aren't colleagues...
Feb 9, 2012 12:14 AM #590385
Your Stickpage name: Crankuba
What is your personality?: He is very driven and has a refusal to give up, due more to optimism than anything else. Even though he tries to see the best in people, the less he knows someone, the more he suspects them of being the Changeling. This doesn't mean that strangers are the only people that he suspects though; they'll just be higher on his list.
What is your physical body like?: Crankuba is a guy in his early twenties with an average basic build. His hair probably has color, but it is far too short to tell for certain.
What is your job?: Miner
Why are you here?: Even from a very young age, Crankuba was told that he could be anything he set his mind to and his eyes sparkled at the idea of becoming the President...that did not work out. 23, out of work, homeless and bankrupt, he took the first job that was offered to him.
What is your personality?: He is very driven and has a refusal to give up, due more to optimism than anything else. Even though he tries to see the best in people, the less he knows someone, the more he suspects them of being the Changeling. This doesn't mean that strangers are the only people that he suspects though; they'll just be higher on his list.
What is your physical body like?: Crankuba is a guy in his early twenties with an average basic build. His hair probably has color, but it is far too short to tell for certain.
What is your job?: Miner
Why are you here?: Even from a very young age, Crankuba was told that he could be anything he set his mind to and his eyes sparkled at the idea of becoming the President...that did not work out. 23, out of work, homeless and bankrupt, he took the first job that was offered to him.
Feb 9, 2012 1:20 AM #590434
Man, these characters are beautiful. I'm going to have lots of fun writing this.
I'll wait a day or two more, or let another few members join, before I start though.
I'll wait a day or two more, or let another few members join, before I start though.
Feb 9, 2012 1:29 AM #590438
actually Devour, make my guy kind of old and on the fatter side. he's not fat, just chubby.
and old.
and loveable.
eDIT: here, I expanded it.
What is your personality?: I'm an easy-going guy who doesn't converse much, but when I do I'm a very nice, helpful guy. I like to help people out.
What is your physical body like?:I'm a dude, and I'm on the older side, maybe 40, and I'm a bit overweight. Think Sean Penn. I rely on my smarts most of the time.
What is your job?: A medic.
Why are you here?: I signed up with the Colonial Marines Medic's Corps in my earlier days and fought many battles on different planets. I was a mediocre soldier, and eventually I got promoted to Captain. And while I was a shitty soldier, I made a great doctor. I always took every chance I could to save someone's life, and I never killed anyone. But I put others well above myself. When I left the military, I attended a school in Medicine and gained my Doctorate in very little time. I eventually got married and graduated from school while receiving multiple awards. however, the hospital I worked at was bombed when my wife was giving birth, and they both died, and the media portrayed me as running out on them. So eventually I started taking jobs that would put me further and further away from Earth. But then I saw the roster for this ship, and I saw an old female classmate on the list. I never met her, but I saw her at a bar the night after, and I became obsessed with her.Eventually I accepted this mission in order to be closer to her, and hopefully, forget my past as a fucking failure. But over time, I became less attracted to her, instead, I saw her as a daughter to be protected.
and old.
and loveable.
eDIT: here, I expanded it.
What is your personality?: I'm an easy-going guy who doesn't converse much, but when I do I'm a very nice, helpful guy. I like to help people out.
What is your physical body like?:I'm a dude, and I'm on the older side, maybe 40, and I'm a bit overweight. Think Sean Penn. I rely on my smarts most of the time.
What is your job?: A medic.
Why are you here?: I signed up with the Colonial Marines Medic's Corps in my earlier days and fought many battles on different planets. I was a mediocre soldier, and eventually I got promoted to Captain. And while I was a shitty soldier, I made a great doctor. I always took every chance I could to save someone's life, and I never killed anyone. But I put others well above myself. When I left the military, I attended a school in Medicine and gained my Doctorate in very little time. I eventually got married and graduated from school while receiving multiple awards. however, the hospital I worked at was bombed when my wife was giving birth, and they both died, and the media portrayed me as running out on them. So eventually I started taking jobs that would put me further and further away from Earth. But then I saw the roster for this ship, and I saw an old female classmate on the list. I never met her, but I saw her at a bar the night after, and I became obsessed with her.Eventually I accepted this mission in order to be closer to her, and hopefully, forget my past as a fucking failure. But over time, I became less attracted to her, instead, I saw her as a daughter to be protected.
Feb 9, 2012 9:55 PM #590973
Zeppo117 (Zeppo for short)
What is your personality?: normally keeps cool, but when angry or in rage; will be hard to control. will try to fight whenever possible. prefers heaver weapons. is a fast learner. can be lazy at times.
What is your physical body like?: male. dose not look muscular, but don't let that fool you, he is strong.
What is your job?: pilot, i guess.
Why are you here?: he volunteered as a worker for transporting miners from the SSS. to meteors and back.
What is your personality?: normally keeps cool, but when angry or in rage; will be hard to control. will try to fight whenever possible. prefers heaver weapons. is a fast learner. can be lazy at times.
What is your physical body like?: male. dose not look muscular, but don't let that fool you, he is strong.
What is your job?: pilot, i guess.
Why are you here?: he volunteered as a worker for transporting miners from the SSS. to meteors and back.
Feb 9, 2012 10:04 PM #590979
There's no such job as a pilot on a space station. I posted the list of jobs your characters could be, if you didn't see.
Feb 9, 2012 10:13 PM #590992
deovour post my super awesome bio.
Feb 10, 2012 12:38 AM #591043
k, then i guess this is who i am; when the SSS. was built, they found my body floating in space. scientists found a raw energy in my body and started to extract it, before they could do so, i escaped from them, so i guess i don't rily have a job, im just there.
Feb 10, 2012 12:59 AM #591053
Quote from Captain Cookdeovour post my super awesome bio.
Done :>
Quote from zeppo117k, then i guess this is who i am; when the SSS. was built, they found my body floating in space. scientists found a raw energy in my body and started to extract it, before they could do so, i escaped from them, so i guess i don't rily have a job, im just there.
That doesn't follow the guide I made for making your own character at all. I won't use that. Sorry.
Feb 10, 2012 1:39 AM #591068
Quote from zeppo117k, then i guess this is who i am; when the SSS. was built, they found my body floating in space. scientists found a raw energy in my body and started to extract it, before they could do so, i escaped from them, so i guess i don't rily have a job, im just there.
Stop trying to make your own story in someone else's story. This isn't a typical story where you character has amazing super powers. We're all regular people who took up an offer on a space station and are now being haunted by a space monster. Nothing to do with raw energy or finding people in space. Devour is writing the story, not you. Either follow the guide or don't get involved.
Feb 10, 2012 2:24 AM #591096
What is your personality?: he is a calm, accessible and friendly person but just the few people that interact with him can say this, although he likes to have friends he uses this to know more about those who walk around in the SSS, enjoys to have conversations (as long as they do not ask about his family) because not many want to talk to him, often he's been seen staring through the reinforced windows of the station watching the emptiness of the space or maybe looking for something, he analyzes the attitude of the people trying to understand them.
What is your physical body like?:39 years oldhe has an average heigh, skin is half brown, he has a black beard that goes from his sideburns till the chin and short hair too, his eyes are brown with a serious glaze and his body describes him as tough guy.
What is your job?:miner
Why are you here?:Philito during his life in the earth was a hard worker miner in México in a coal mine, he lived in the mountains near to his workplace along with her wife in a small house.
What he told to the court was that one night while he was sleeping the sound of a door slam woke him up, he took a look outside the window and saw her wife getting into the pine forest so he grab his gun in case there were some freaky wild animals around and went behind her, after loosing the trace he found her but she was no longer the woman he loved, there was no more Mariana inside of that skin, her eyes were completely red and a dark saliva was coming from her mouth, it was a monstrosity, he had to shoot her, the shot was heard by a cop near the road, after that he was sent to a mental hospital for 10 years, when he finally came out he heard about the SSS and saw it as the only place were he could get away from his past, he went to the USA and took the course of space mining, with a high rating in the knowledge and skills test he barely move to the SSS because of his treated mental illness.
If you want to include, just an idea of me: during the autopsy of her wife there was found an unknown ore inside her body, along with other samples of the same material from other countries they where all send to be investigated by the best facilities in the SSS, and well thats all
also what do we mine? space rocks?
What is your physical body like?:39 years oldhe has an average heigh, skin is half brown, he has a black beard that goes from his sideburns till the chin and short hair too, his eyes are brown with a serious glaze and his body describes him as tough guy.
What is your job?:miner
Why are you here?:Philito during his life in the earth was a hard worker miner in México in a coal mine, he lived in the mountains near to his workplace along with her wife in a small house.
What he told to the court was that one night while he was sleeping the sound of a door slam woke him up, he took a look outside the window and saw her wife getting into the pine forest so he grab his gun in case there were some freaky wild animals around and went behind her, after loosing the trace he found her but she was no longer the woman he loved, there was no more Mariana inside of that skin, her eyes were completely red and a dark saliva was coming from her mouth, it was a monstrosity, he had to shoot her, the shot was heard by a cop near the road, after that he was sent to a mental hospital for 10 years, when he finally came out he heard about the SSS and saw it as the only place were he could get away from his past, he went to the USA and took the course of space mining, with a high rating in the knowledge and skills test he barely move to the SSS because of his treated mental illness.
If you want to include, just an idea of me: during the autopsy of her wife there was found an unknown ore inside her body, along with other samples of the same material from other countries they where all send to be investigated by the best facilities in the SSS, and well thats all
also what do we mine? space rocks?
Feb 10, 2012 2:58 AM #591117
Okay same here. Look Philito, was it really necessary to create that immense of a backstory? That whole background info in itself could be made into your own individual project. Instead you're wasting it in some background info for a story that has nothing to do with that. What other reason do you have in making that complex story background than to have it affect the story plot? You could have easily said that he lived in Mexico with his wife as a miner and she was murdered. Philito witnessed the murder, thus causing him traumatic psychological damage. That's more logical than his wife becoming some sort of chupacabra thing. And who are you to state what the SSS is investigating? and how come what they're investigating has to be directly involved with your character's backstory? You're writing the story for Devour, that's not how this is supposed to work. I'm not Devour, but if I was in his position and I was seeing these submissions of people trying to write the story for me, I'd be a little peeved.
Feb 10, 2012 3:19 AM #591146
Added. I'll have to take out a bit of that backstory so that it doesnt cause me scrolling troubles while I study everyone's characters, though. And Im afraid this is going to be more of a mystery story. It revolves around the Changeling. Not the space station, lol.
Also, I'm starting this tomorrow. :> You guys can still make characters, but the story will begin. And you guys can try and figure this mystery out.
Also, I'm starting this tomorrow. :> You guys can still make characters, but the story will begin. And you guys can try and figure this mystery out.