some of my drawings :)
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View Profile Nice. Though there were some proportion problems.
The picture of Ghost holding the gun was a bit misplaced with the hands. The hands should be more down of the gun. It looks like he's holding a pistol, yet he's holding an assault rifle. Plus, the eyes are a bit blocked out by some parts of the head. The feet are way too small and the legs are too short. Extend them or just blur them out.
The dragon is pretty sick. Nothing to critique, there.
I think the picture of Kakashi is a bit awkward. Don't know how to explain it, but the head drawing isn't quite right.
The picture of Master Chief is nice. Too epic for my eyes!
The pictures of you, Cel, and DiPi are all nice and well drawn. Nothing to critique.
Overall, you still have some proportion problems when it comes to angles on some objects. Keep on drawing, man! They are all looking good! :D
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View Profile Screw you daehan! But still those drawings are epic man!
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View Profile @JTRD his just giving some constructive critcism.
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View Profile they're very sketchy, and there are minor problems all throughout, but I'm digging some of your ideas here. Have you tried coloring any of them, with flash or photoshop...or even with traditional media?
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View Profile I personally enjoyed the first, second, the halo head and last two.
now with the Kakashi head, what went wrong is you went for the anime-face thingy with his cheek on the right.
If I recall right his whole face is very rigid and slim.
Both sides of the head wont be exactly the same all the time, but a profile shot like this you probably could.
As of right now he looks really beat up o.e
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View Profile Criticism aside, these are honestly some of the best freehand drawings I have ever seen.
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View Profile the drawing of Kakashi, was drawn by memory, i haven't seen the show in a long time
there i posted
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View Profile You should add some of your other drawings ;)
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