Okay, so here are the things you need to improve on.
Firstly, have you read the first page? I said put all your effort into your tryout.
So, here are my comments:
Excellion, Improve the movements and reactions of you attacks, and the effects. Add filter effects to enhance your tryout. Don't rush anything, because we still have no deadline for tryouts.
CraziestGod, make the movements more lifelike and realistic. Not like some hardline whatever. It looks like it was done with 30 FPS and quite a few frames. Reactions are too idle, and you can't really see the attack because it's too fast.
Again, don't rush anything, and I'm not trying to be mean, I'm trying to improve you. Mannez said there were others still trying out, so send me in advance when you finish it.