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Apr 23, 2008 11:01 PM #121820
yeah I'm finally getting to know max a bit better. so my next step is to fiddle with lightning and such. here's a little table scene.

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Apr 23, 2008 11:12 PM #121831
hmm, not bad.
I think the tablecloth needs more depth to the texturing, and I dislike the wood texture of the floor and chair. They look to pale and bland.
Also, the floor needs a shine, since wood floors are coated with a shiny substance to prevent water absorbtion.

The toast and plate look great.
The top of the glass looks odd. Possibly due to the wierd top edge and black coloring.
The walls look good.
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Apr 23, 2008 11:41 PM #121893
I like it, especially the shadow of the glass, The bread, and the plate.
The floor looks as if it rises. Not too keen on the window, either.

Really good job though. Keep it up.
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Apr 23, 2008 11:42 PM #121897
from the looks of it there are no windows above post.
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Apr 23, 2008 11:45 PM #121906
I meant the missing block in the wall, sorry.
Ruins the whole thing, in my opinion.

"Above post"? That's cold...
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Apr 23, 2008 11:46 PM #121907
sos my heart and soul
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Apr 23, 2008 11:56 PM #121927
Dude, you drew that?! That's awsome! It's so realistic! I thought it was a photo at first!
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Apr 24, 2008 12:11 AM #121951
he didnt draw it, he modeled it. and rendered it.
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Apr 24, 2008 1:08 AM #122024
Quote from iStick G
Dude, you drew that?! That's awsome! It's so realistic! I thought it was a photo at first!


God ****ing new shit.

The glass and toast were perfect. Walls look warped though and like said earlier, wood texture needs work.
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Apr 24, 2008 2:15 AM #122072
I think it looks great and the bread looks awesome but it does look kinda soggy
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Apr 24, 2008 6:42 AM #122228
thanks for the feedback guys, ill try to fix some small errors here and there and maybe add some stuff :)
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Apr 25, 2008 10:59 AM #123075
i thought it was a photo at first, then i saw the walls, and the ground.


=D

the bread makes me hungry >=(
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Apr 25, 2008 2:32 PM #123148
cool. but i think the floor should be fixed :)
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May 5, 2008 1:09 AM #129005
the part of the floor with the light on it is the only problem i have with this picture. In my eyes its B-E-A-utiful mate. :>
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