link doesn't seem to be working. is it a huge file or is there a problem?

Try again, I managed to fuck up copypasting a link.

The gear theme at the joints look really nice but I'd like to see that sort of thing around the vast landscape of his torso, but the design so far is really nice. I love what the smoke does to the outline of his head!

Thanks a lot! I'll try to add some detail to the torso as you suggested.

Keep the critique coming people!

Knap gedaan, maar is dat pijpje op zijn schouder een soort van schoorsteen waar rook uitkomt?

Dat is het zeker! Ik vind rook simpelweg leuk om te tekenen, haha.


For the sake of our fellow dickpageans, do speak English though.

http://thezyles.deviantart.com/art/A-robot-288699772

Updated dat sheet. Any suggestions for the background?

It does look pretty nice man. even though the gears do not make much sense to be hip joints like that, still a cool concept.

Yeah, I guess it doesn't make any sense. I reckon all he could do is walk like a crab. Sense is way overrated, though! haha

Uploaded the final version, I don't think I'll add any more to it. And yes, I realize some gears aren't shaded. I'd finish it but I'm getting bored of constantly working on the same thing. The contrast the white outlines provide is kind of neat, don't you think? Anyway, I'm open to suggestions about what to draw next.


http://thezyles.deviantart.com/#/d4rvu64

I reckon I ought to get some more critique on this. Be critical people! Point out everything that's wrong!