First attempt ever, please critique

Started by: Kinru | Replies: 3 | Views: 525

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Apr 6, 2012 12:12 AM #628529
Yeah so this is the first time I've ever worked with flash or a tablet or really drawn anything lol. Feel free to comment as you like, just looking for some input.

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Apr 6, 2012 7:59 AM #628687
it was pretty nice for a first time
but your walk could use some inbetween frames :D
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Apr 6, 2012 10:29 AM #628728
that slomo rotation was actually very convincing. even people who are good animators often mess up on slow motion. despite that, i have to say ur walk was a bit choppy and when the guy lands after the slomo part, u should have eased the landing a little more. u hav a very creative though process however and i hope u continue animating. :)
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Apr 6, 2012 10:30 AM #628729
I'm impressed. Nice work! I suggest you study hard on easing and anticipation and try to spice up the movement a little more, and you'll be great in no time! :)