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Trying to get animating again!! :)

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Kieran.
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Apr 17, 2012 7:42 PM #636779
Hi guys so I haven't animated in about a year, maybe two, but the merger of FA and SPP really got me inspired by your animations, so I thought It'd give it a shot!
Like I know the normal problems, like easing and choppiness, but I think that can go with practice.
Ideally with your C&C I can improve and maybe even get my next project sponsored by SPP itself!! I know its ambitious, but everything's possible :)

Well, here we go! (The sound turned out really really quiet for some reason so you might wanna turn your volume up)

http://www.fileize.com/view/95e450d6-1e3/

Thanks in advance guys, hope you enjoy it :)
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Apr 17, 2012 7:45 PM #636783
Oohh wow, I quite like it! I'd love to see more from you really! I mean, I remember you from back then, just as then your animations are just.. plain amazing, I llove the style!
as for the C&C, There really isn't much to comment on, it's spot on really.. though, like you mentioned you might want to work a bit on easing, the swing really needs to be better, as it rotates it'll move faster upward and downards because of the swing it's given..
also try out different tools as brush and line tool, they can be essential for full 'body' animations like these!

keep them cuming!
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Apr 17, 2012 11:53 PM #636964
Wow, that was amazing! I'm thoroughly satisfied at how thorough you are, with your animations. My mouth was still open and drooling until my mom walked in and reminded me to shut it! Great job!
The only thing i would suggest is your facial expressions and I think you'd be quite the tiger!
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Apr 18, 2012 2:26 AM #637062
Quote from Fairytail

keep them cuming!


Eww. Just eww.

Anyway, it was kinda wobbly, especially the center. Perhaps you can make proper stickfigure animations so that your skills can improve?

(PS. The FA-SP merge inspired you to do that? O.o)
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Apr 18, 2012 10:19 AM #637169
Thanks for the support!! It's really amazing to be appreciated by such brilliant guys as yourselves :)

Ok I'll try and work on the wobbliness for my next one, maybe I'll even try and add some more detail next time?

Blood sweat and tears went into making this, it really did.
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Apr 18, 2012 11:06 AM #637177
That looked traced, you dirty fucker =]
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Apr 18, 2012 4:11 PM #637268
Hey, I memorized that movement!!
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Apr 18, 2012 5:44 PM #637321
ball sack was a little wobbly.

god I give good cc.
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