This is really not bad. A few things you can work on though are the close-ups and that walk loop in the beginning. The guy takes 2 steps, stops, 2 steps stops, and repeats. I really like your effects though, they're simple and get the job done right. Can't wait to see what Gale's got.
yh, maybe you shouldnt have put the thread up in the first place, you could have waited for blackstar to finish and then you can post the thread with both the RHGs so people will not have to wait to vote.
Yeah, I know, but we both agreed that the deadline was today. It should've been empty for only a few hours, but I haven't recieved any PMs from BlackStar saying he was finished.